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The Order [.]
[.]
"In Order To Clean Himself Up, He Had To Dirty Her" - Unknown (sic)
[.]
Eyes
rolling towards
satan's
residence
in the bloodied earth's
fiery core
Sweat flowing in
red rivers
between thighs
dripping
from
the
knee
[.]
Begging
to visit
volcanic eruption
in the shudder
of the core's
tremor
Leather Warning
"WAIT!"
Ropes tighten
in the black watercolour
once
called
Mascara
(before it had a use)
[.]
[.]
[.]
"Finish yourself!"
growls
the passage tunnel
while the swing
holds
curled
toes
in oblivion
just, 2 inches
from the
floor
in love
and lust
in love, and lust
in hate and love, and lust
and love and hate,
in lust
[.]
the light goes out.
Takes A Shower
[.]
[.]
Published 8th Apr 2019
| Edited 9th Apr 2019
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8th Apr 2019 11:17pm
A fine work regarding BDSM, Alistair. I try to write in this vein and don't approach your flair. Love the wording, structure and use of punctuation. A unique write, all the way.
9th Apr 2019 11:05pm
Thank You Mr Fly
Rather good to see your voice on it!
These heavy writes are subjective. some call them smut, some call them erotic literature some call them art and some just call them rubbish! to be honest, I'm on the side of the fence that says if you got the balls to write it out, and you got the words and strange technique and you got what it takes to live it. Then make 'em hard and enjoy it ;)
I must visit your pages a bit, I was outta town a while, I'll be sure to do that!
thanks for flying over and even more for stopping by.
Blue skies at you
Al
Rather good to see your voice on it!
These heavy writes are subjective. some call them smut, some call them erotic literature some call them art and some just call them rubbish! to be honest, I'm on the side of the fence that says if you got the balls to write it out, and you got the words and strange technique and you got what it takes to live it. Then make 'em hard and enjoy it ;)
I must visit your pages a bit, I was outta town a while, I'll be sure to do that!
thanks for flying over and even more for stopping by.
Blue skies at you
Al
10th Apr 2019 11:17pm
If one could...many of us would...a powerful Dionysian piece of poetry Alistair.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
22nd Apr 2019 10:22pm
