Broken Dreams

Easier to make good a repair if both work at it
But only my opinion
Loved the read

I appreciate the encouragement, Rose 🌹

You're kind. Thanks for the continued readership and support!

Captured that ... Bless and love ..

You too, Fenyx. Thanks for stopping by once again!

beautifully structured; thought provoking; liked

Hey SweetOblivion,

You're awesome. Thank you for your kindness and readership. It's kind of depressing, but I'm glad that you liked it.

What a creative, accurate analogy. You're right. It is much like a sepia toned photo...

Thanks for stopping by again, Ego, and thanks for the support!

A sad ink NB. I can feel a pang in this poem:(

Thanks for taking the time to read and comment again, summer. I almost didn't post this because I thought it was a bit too emotional. I don't want to bring anyone else down, you know?

You're welcome NB. I always look forward to reading your poem.

I hope they rip through and move on so you can discover happiness once again, NB.

Thanks for your kindness and your support, Ahavati. It means a lot. You're a wonderful woman!

This is very deep and I can feel the emotions in such few powerful words. <3

Hey mysterious!

I see you've visited several of my poems now, so thanks for the readership. I'm glad that you can relate to my writings, and am always happy to hear when someone is able to relate to my poetry, as it makes me feel less alone in this world. So thank you :)

Aw always here for my fellow poets!  <3  And you are never alone. :)

So heartfelt. It's poignant and beautiful.


love
Jamsmine

Thanks Jasmine. I appreciate the compliment, although I can't agree with you that it's beautiful - perhaps in the sense of a beautiful tragedy...

Anyway, thanks so much for stopping by to read my poetry again!

Fantastic write m8 I dig this👏👏
So much said in so little words
Bravo!

Hunter,

Once again, I appreciate your continued readership and support, despite my own neglect. I've been pretty busy with a new job - am looking forward to reading more of your poetry :)

Thank you for the positivity. I sure hope so! Thanks for your wonderful comments and your readership. I appreciate you, U.G. Rose :)

Thanks so much for your continued support...!

I love poems that leave the mind wondering, but I feel as if there was so much left unsaid here. Tragic, I know there is a story behind this.. I absolutely love it and I wouldn't mind knowing the story, If you'd be willing to share. Great write. :)

Haunting ...

Thank you, LilDragonFly! I appreciate you stopping by once again :)

Captures really well the essence of that painful phase when things have to move on.

This stung

Thanks for stopping by, dontuseme!