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Save Me
Just save me, as the pain uncurls
I’m scared of walking this world —
Lonely, you can’t begin to understand
Pills, lines and needles, I’ve tried it
It doesn’t work for me, they just hide it
When I finally reach the surface
Everything’s blurry, and everything’s back
I’m fighting so hard to win this war
My head is numb, my vision is black
My body hurts, I can’t come back
Oh, and I needed that
I’m scared of walking this world —
Lonely, you can’t begin to understand
Pills, lines and needles, I’ve tried it
It doesn’t work for me, they just hide it
When I finally reach the surface
Everything’s blurry, and everything’s back
I’m fighting so hard to win this war
My head is numb, my vision is black
My body hurts, I can’t come back
Oh, and I needed that
Published 12th Mar 2019
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12th Mar 2019 6:30pm
Such a relatable piece!
"I’m scared of walking this world —
Lonely, you can’t begin to understand "
I for sure understand the feeling
Very much resonates
Great write👏👏
"I’m scared of walking this world —
Lonely, you can’t begin to understand "
I for sure understand the feeling
Very much resonates
Great write👏👏
12th Mar 2019 6:32pm
Thanks so much, Hunterapsych. You know, it often feels like nobody could understand, when in all reality, most truly do. Thanks for the read☺️
12th Mar 2019 9:26pm
Felt deeply ... your thoughts beautifully expressed ... though it may often feel so, one is never truly alone ... Bless and much love, Liv ...
12th Mar 2019 10:15pm
13th Mar 2019 2:38pm
It’s a silent struggle we all face and from others cause we think we should br stronger when it reality we are strong cause we contour the fight good write
