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Moonlight Thighs
Flanked by a timbered realm, lay me down under the orb of a cerulean colored sky of night
Kept from Mistress Luna, no secrets; our lips & flesh in sweet carress by her celestial candlelight
Whisper me tender, as to the sacred cosmos above; an elysian hymn in poetic
rhyme
In thighs divided; two starry eyed souls magnetized by love unfolding, a scene sublime
Riding & sowing our astral ocean; one heart conversant...unified in mind & body
equal
Our crescendo in moonlight; fulgent & scintillating like fallen droplets of stardust sequins
Published 27th Feb 2019
| Edited 6th Mar 2019
Author's Note
You know my love of writing about sex under the night sky by now.;)
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27th Feb 2019 6:59am
Very yummy (yup, that's an official comment lol). "In thighs divided; two starry eyed souls magnetized by love unfolding -- a scene
sublime" incredible lines :-)
sublime" incredible lines :-)
27th Feb 2019 7:04am
That's more than enough comment. Thank you for the add. Now write something naughty for me to match & throw this sensuality out. Lol
27th Feb 2019 7:10am
Haha. I think I wrote too much for awhile. But I always have some ideas rolling in my head. Till then I'll just enjoy the loveliness that is your poetry.
27th Feb 2019 7:11am
With you, to parody a Neil Diamond song line from Love on the Rocks, 'Love under the stars ain't no surprise'! Share Devils Child's choice of favourite line.
27th Feb 2019 7:15am
Thank you, Solomon. I'm glad & going to check that song out in a bit.
27th Feb 2019 7:13am
27th Feb 2019 7:19am
Thank you, Naajir..your comment humbles me. I know you get your naughty writes going, but you are one of the kings of sensuality @ DUP. I'm grateful for your reads!!
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27th Feb 2019 9:13pm
That's a beautiful comment. Shambles in comparison, so I dearly thank you for it & the add.
27th Feb 2019 12:19pm
Seductively simmering. Love the reference to the "astral ocean". You sketch a pleasing scene. Nice!
27th Feb 2019 9:24pm
Thank you, T. I had been wanting to use "sowing oceans" or likewise somewhere.
27th Feb 2019 11:09pm
27th Feb 2019 12:35pm
your words fill the mind of sensual thoughts
sweet erotic lines flow free from your inter soul
sweet erotic lines flow free from your inter soul
27th Feb 2019 9:26pm
Thank you for such a sweet comment. It's good to know my intentions are reflected in my words.
Anonymous
27th Feb 2019 1:27pm
Beautifully sensual
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1st Mar 2019 2:29am
Thank you Hunter. I'm glad you stopped by to bless me with your sweet words & add. I'm grateful!!
28th Feb 2019 00:37am
Such eloquence! Your love of sex under the night sky is beautifully presented. Truly great work, and I don't say that lightly.
1st Mar 2019 2:31am
Thank you for always offering such the encouragement in my writing endeavors. It's truly appreciated. Big hugs!!
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1st Mar 2019 2:34am
Thank you for your the lovely comment. I appreciate it dearly, Barona.🙏(there is no girl praying in my emojis.lol)
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1st Mar 2019 4:17am
I thought about that afterwards. I know your beliefs & the intent. It's just "that" in my head is all. It's all good & you know I'm cool with whatever you feel.👌
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1st Mar 2019 7:00am
i thought your poem was so sublime any one's inside could so beautifully rhyme sublime sublime give me lemon wind i have always had too much red wine sublime sublime so sublime how again wishes such thought were mine ooo sub in my lime
1st Mar 2019 7:33am
Heehee. Thank you for the add & I'm glad to have helped you with your own rhyme;)
1st Mar 2019 9:21am
1st Mar 2019 6:28pm
beautiful Pandora you shine here in this celestial sensuality
so divine is your passion...
lusting your beautiful erotic...
love Brenda 🌹
so divine is your passion...
lusting your beautiful erotic...
love Brenda 🌹
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5th Mar 2019 11:00pm
I so appreciate your support today. I'm so very gracious, sweet Danny. Thank you!!
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