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Much overwhelmed
Thoughts to share
meant so much before
meaningless without caring listeners
just the blank wall
indifference written in invisible ink
love is a mystery
chased coveted needed
it doesn't matter anymore
languishing on a divan
pretending to be queen
comfort from a comforter
listening to the clock tick
will the scytheman come
for me tonight
meant so much before
meaningless without caring listeners
just the blank wall
indifference written in invisible ink
love is a mystery
chased coveted needed
it doesn't matter anymore
languishing on a divan
pretending to be queen
comfort from a comforter
listening to the clock tick
will the scytheman come
for me tonight
Published 23rd Feb 2019
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23rd Feb 2019 11:13pm
So somber... There are at least a few people here that are 'caring listeners'. I enjoy your poetry, so thanks for sharing.
24th Apr 2019 7:42am
Hi NewBeginnings, thank you so much for reading me:) I know...there are caring listeners too, and grateful for them as always.
23rd Feb 2019 11:52pm
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24th Feb 2019 4:27am
H Grace i hate to read your feeling this way..
Remember you are loved here...
maybe not all at once sometimes but you have many who do love and care about you ..
Love Jackie xo
Remember you are loved here...
maybe not all at once sometimes but you have many who do love and care about you ..
Love Jackie xo
24th Apr 2019 7:45am
I know Jackie and I am grateful...just that I am not too chirpy nowadays:) but one day I will be again. Thanks for being here.
25th Feb 2019 1:11am
"The scytheman" is one of many details that I love here. A dark but gorgeous write.
24th Apr 2019 7:46am
Hi dear Crowfly....seems like scytheman is one of my repeated personality. :) haha...thank you so much for reading me as always.
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24th Apr 2019 7:47am
Thank you so much for reading me, Melia. I always have that connection with you on another level...as always I appreciate you reading me.
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