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☆Rhapsody☆
As the moonbeams kiss the sea;
meet me at the ever so magestic equinox
Two embers of the same aura & flame ---
a labyrinth of our flesh and bones;
synchronicity more torrid than the stars
Beneath and before the all infinite ---
both cosmos and waves of liquid mirth;
annihilate me upon those grains of sand Fuck me into an empyrean rhapsody ---
as I sing to you; my sweet seraphic vespers
meet me at the ever so magestic equinox
Two embers of the same aura & flame ---
a labyrinth of our flesh and bones;
synchronicity more torrid than the stars
Beneath and before the all infinite ---
both cosmos and waves of liquid mirth;
annihilate me upon those grains of sand Fuck me into an empyrean rhapsody ---
as I sing to you; my sweet seraphic vespers
Written by
PandoraUnleashed
Published 13th Feb 2019
| Edited 6th Mar 2019
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Re. Rhapsody
13th Feb 2019 3:37am
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14th Feb 2019 3:01am
Thank you, T. It's like sating word lust when that happens, for me. I love my flowery euphanisums, so I was in love when I found it.
Re. Rhapsody
13th Feb 2019 3:53am
wow what a hot write
from out of the fog over the sea comes out the sensual words of a erotic song
under the moon beam comes her lover
from out of the fog over the sea comes out the sensual words of a erotic song
under the moon beam comes her lover
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13th Feb 2019 5:02am
I simply love the way you write...your use of language is very seductive...(loved the Billy Eilish song)....
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14th Feb 2019 3:08am
I'm smiling ear to ear from such a beautiful compliment. Sending you one big virtual hug, Lawrence! I listen to her often, I'm glad you liked that song.;)
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13th Feb 2019 6:32am
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14th Feb 2019 3:09am
Mmhhmm..I write about sex at the ocean & under the moon an awful lot so I combined the world's. What a dream.;)
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14th Feb 2019 6:35am
Poems like this remind me of the beach love scene in the movie From Here To Eternity.
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14th Feb 2019 6:39am
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Anonymous
13th Feb 2019 7:29am
Hey Pandy,
Beautiful writing, my buddy. You ooze sensuality.
Matthew.
Beautiful writing, my buddy. You ooze sensuality.
Matthew.
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Thank you Matthew. Sensual is my middle name, or I wish it to be. Lol. My next one is anything but sensual & sensual, I prefer but just had to get naughty. Haha Glad you liked it. Happy Valentine's day buddy.
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Anonymous
14th Feb 2019 8:03am
Lol. My middle name is Middle Name(my parents forgot to put anything in that field, so they thought it was that). It's embarrassing, but it makes a good Abbott and Costello bit at the DMV:
Middle name? Middle Name. No, I'm asking what your middle name is!! Middle Name. Ugh. It's hilarious, in an unfunny way.😄🙃🤓.
Thanks Pandy!
Matthew.
Middle name? Middle Name. No, I'm asking what your middle name is!! Middle Name. Ugh. It's hilarious, in an unfunny way.😄🙃🤓.
Thanks Pandy!
Matthew.
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14th Feb 2019 2:12pm
Lol. You keep me laughing Matthew. I didn't realize til several years ago from my dad, I grew up with the wrong middle name. Haha, the adoption papers were messed up but it was close enough. 😅
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Anonymous
14th Feb 2019 5:01pm
Really??!! Wow, that's crazy. My parents tried to change my name to the neighbor's so I'd go over there, but I caught on to them...after 11 years. I'm no dummy! lol.
Thanks for being an awesome buddy, buddy!
Matthew.
Thanks for being an awesome buddy, buddy!
Matthew.
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14th Feb 2019 6:07pm
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13th Feb 2019 12:41pm
Beautifully penned in such a poetic manner pandy absolutely love this👏👏
Serene imagery truly timeless!👏👏
Serene imagery truly timeless!👏👏
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Pandy bows to your graces , dear poet. ;) Thank you greatly for the applause and lovely comment!!
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14th Feb 2019 3:16am
Thank you, MysticalRose. I so appreciate you stopping by & giving me a smile!!
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Anonymous
13th Feb 2019 12:48pm
ethereal seduction through verbiage....
lovely...
lovely...
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14th Feb 2019 3:14am
Thank you. I love that word and it was the goal in this write. I'm glad you enjoyed it!!
Re. Rhapsody
13th Feb 2019 2:01pm
"When the moon beams kiss the sea"
Hey bartender, set up a sex-on-the-beach for this poetess. 🍸
Hey bartender, set up a sex-on-the-beach for this poetess. 🍸
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14th Feb 2019 3:17am
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14th Feb 2019 3:20am
Crowfly, your comments are like music to my ears. I'm glad you felt the music🎶 You may hear a slightly different tune with the next one. Lol Big hugs for the add too.
Re. Rhapsody
14th Feb 2019 3:24am
beautiful Pandora this is so lovingly sensual
it soothes me somehow...
gorgeous write...
love Brenda 🌹
it soothes me somehow...
gorgeous write...
love Brenda 🌹
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14th Feb 2019 3:36am
I thank you to the moon & back, beautiful one!! You're so sweet. Happy Valentine's day to my fellow Goddess, we get to celebrate twice.;) Big hugs!!⚘
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