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Life Is a Beach
We are more
more than we think
thoughts drift in like waves
leaving a damaged shoreline
the wreckage rots slowly
creeping, sinking feelings follow
we are more than we think
we are more.
more than we think
thoughts drift in like waves
leaving a damaged shoreline
the wreckage rots slowly
creeping, sinking feelings follow
we are more than we think
we are more.
Published 25th Jan 2019
| Edited 9th Feb 2019
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26th Jan 2019 2:48pm
Wonderful write love this message and the structure of this lil piece
Great spill
"we are more than we think
we are more"
So damn true but the thoughts get in the way of realizing this beautiful truth that we are way more than we could ever believe
Excellent write👏👏
Great spill
"we are more than we think
we are more"
So damn true but the thoughts get in the way of realizing this beautiful truth that we are way more than we could ever believe
Excellent write👏👏
26th Jan 2019 10:49pm
26th Jan 2019 10:52pm
Concise poem with a powerful message and a clever title. We musn't underestimate ourselves, be beaten down, and let our self esteems erode us away.
27th Jan 2019 00:54am
