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poets
poets
the emotionally charged
overloaded motherfuckers
who don't see nothing
beyond their selves
it is always
invariably
about their pain
their suffer(ing)
their hunger
their needs
oblivious to their inflicting
of grief
on others
with their ego-verse-centric
deeds
blunders
stuff ups
disdains
and yet
they think the universe
is out to get them
fuck you poet!
fuck you!
fuuuuuuuckkkk! youuuuuuuu!!
now go ahead
and call the above drivel
poetry!
you're welcome ;-)
the emotionally charged
overloaded motherfuckers
who don't see nothing
beyond their selves
it is always
invariably
about their pain
their suffer(ing)
their hunger
their needs
oblivious to their inflicting
of grief
on others
with their ego-verse-centric
deeds
blunders
stuff ups
disdains
and yet
they think the universe
is out to get them
fuck you poet!
fuck you!
fuuuuuuuckkkk! youuuuuuuu!!
now go ahead
and call the above drivel
poetry!
you're welcome ;-)
Published 5th Jan 2019
Author's Note
not directed at any particular nor blanket coverage of all poets...more a self reflection and as i see barring quite a few select selfless souls here and outside world
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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- Edited 7th May 2019 00:46am
5th Jan 2019 9:23am
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5th Jan 2019 9:27am
welcome dear friend
i reckon the Author's note explains it better.
like most things in life... the truth lies somewhere in the middle
appreciate the visit
the insight
immensely
i reckon the Author's note explains it better.
like most things in life... the truth lies somewhere in the middle
appreciate the visit
the insight
immensely
Anonymous
- Edited 7th May 2019 00:46am
5th Jan 2019 9:30am
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5th Jan 2019 9:43am
5th Jan 2019 12:33pm
5th Jan 2019 2:43pm
welcome
is the friend admired
welcome
is the insight and support! :-)
appreciation
immense
is the friend admired
welcome
is the insight and support! :-)
appreciation
immense
5th Jan 2019 12:49pm
It's a soapbox so you can do what you want with it
When all else fails there's always extreme sex and mayhem to rev your engine
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When all else fails there's always extreme sex and mayhem to rev your engine
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5th Jan 2019 2:17pm
5th Jan 2019 2:22pm
5th Jan 2019 2:49pm
welcome dear Friend admired!
well indeed it is and yes to all you said! not set out to ruffle feathers but to put out my observation of both self and in general in unvarnished way i felt it ought to.
humbled. you liked.
well indeed it is and yes to all you said! not set out to ruffle feathers but to put out my observation of both self and in general in unvarnished way i felt it ought to.
humbled. you liked.
5th Jan 2019 2:25pm
All artists are selfish to a degree - they are more oft than not forced to choose to create over societal expectations as a whole.
I learned a lot about selfishness in 2018 - what I observed is how those who deem others selfish are typically upset because the person is actually catering to their own needs vs serving another.
I'm not referring to those with personality disorders, e.g. - narcissism, sociopaths, etc. Nor am I referring to your observations. I'm referring to the everyday Joe who wants to live life for himself vs catering to others all the time.
Also, I wonder if anything can be poetry if written in poetic form . . .
I learned a lot about selfishness in 2018 - what I observed is how those who deem others selfish are typically upset because the person is actually catering to their own needs vs serving another.
I'm not referring to those with personality disorders, e.g. - narcissism, sociopaths, etc. Nor am I referring to your observations. I'm referring to the everyday Joe who wants to live life for himself vs catering to others all the time.
Also, I wonder if anything can be poetry if written in poetic form . . .
5th Jan 2019 2:58pm
Welcome dear Sage One!
indeed they are and yes i would even go further than you in saying more often they are moulded by societal expectations and their own circumstances.
i admire your mature observation re those judging others as selfish being the upset one. It takes great deal of patience, tolerance and objectivity to reach that conslusion. No harm in caring for self. In fact one can only care for other when one is fit enough to do so... moderation and avoiding the extremes in anything is the key i believe.
And well it is upto the person/reader recipient to determine for themselves what they find artistic/poetic... highly subjective point. And seriously who determines what's art... what's art to some is blashpemy to others and vice versa ..
the observation started as a self reflection over some recent past events where the focus was lost to those were in urgent needs versus own woe is me stuff...
welcome your wisdom dear A! open arms!
indeed they are and yes i would even go further than you in saying more often they are moulded by societal expectations and their own circumstances.
i admire your mature observation re those judging others as selfish being the upset one. It takes great deal of patience, tolerance and objectivity to reach that conslusion. No harm in caring for self. In fact one can only care for other when one is fit enough to do so... moderation and avoiding the extremes in anything is the key i believe.
And well it is upto the person/reader recipient to determine for themselves what they find artistic/poetic... highly subjective point. And seriously who determines what's art... what's art to some is blashpemy to others and vice versa ..
the observation started as a self reflection over some recent past events where the focus was lost to those were in urgent needs versus own woe is me stuff...
welcome your wisdom dear A! open arms!
5th Jan 2019 5:17pm
Ha loved this piece! And love your vibe
"poets
the emotionally charged
overloaded motherfuckers
who don't see nothing
beyond their selves"
It do be that way sometimes
Great write!👏👌
"poets
the emotionally charged
overloaded motherfuckers
who don't see nothing
beyond their selves"
It do be that way sometimes
Great write!👏👌
5th Jan 2019 5:27pm
welcome dear Friend
admired
welcome also
is the kind, generous appreciation
we all do at some point in time
but the key remains not staying there forever :-)
admired
welcome also
is the kind, generous appreciation
we all do at some point in time
but the key remains not staying there forever :-)
5th Jan 2019 10:39pm
6th Jan 2019 11:26am
Jadey... hope you didn't get it wrong.. i left that Author's not very clear... and you are one of those select few selfless souls i am referring to. And the poets...well you know very well those that care not about the hurt to the ones helping them ...
6th Jan 2019 2:46am
This is basically what the crazy bitch inside my head says to me (about me) whenever I actually take some time to care about myself....
Heh, you are absolutely right. It is a selfish endeavor, but the sense of community that it creates in a setting like this is wonderful. It seems you're a bit ticked in this one, so I think you've expressed your frustrations well.
29th Jan 2019 8:31pm
Hahaha....lots of truth in there. Never hurts to have a good rant. That's a stereotype though. Not all of us are like that. I see it here in the forum quite a bit though. It's actually kind of amusing to me.
