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Dad

 
rusty panting breath
as you labour to the light
such strange lullaby
brokentitanium
Written by brokentitanium (k.)
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Re. Dad
30th Dec 2018 11:42am
With you on your sad journey....
PoetSpeak
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Re: Re. Dad
(k.)
30th Dec 2018 7:33pm
Thank you, friend. It means a lot.
brokentitanium
Re. Dad
2nd Jan 2019 1:59am
Beautiful haiku, friend...
NewBeginnings
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Re: Re. Dad
(k.)
2nd Jan 2019 2:08am
Thank you. I almost forgot I had written it.....
brokentitanium
Re. Dad
3rd Jan 2019 7:00pm
closure.
hope healing one...for all.
soon.
cold_fusion
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Re: Re. Dad
(k.)
4th Jan 2019 3:43am
closure & relief achieved.  Thank you. :)
k
brokentitanium
Re. Dad
(Tams)
13th Jan 2019 9:40pm
I am so sorry  for your loss, brokentitanium. May peace replace the emptiness and surpass the love you both shared here on earth.
Ahavati
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Re: Re. Dad
(k.)
14th Jan 2019 00:23am
Thank you. <3
brokentitanium

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