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Because I Cannot Stop For Death
( a Quatern )
Because I cannot stop for Death,
The Host of passage will oblige.
And thus shall quiet take my breath,
In disbelief must I abide.
Will I be running for a bus,
Because I cannot stop for Death.
Is there no other way for us,
To keep me from eternal rest?
I don’t believe in being blessed,
To have another chance at life.
Because I cannot stop for Death,
That waits to cut me like a knife.
The test I’m given will I fail,
I know I haven’t much time left.
If you could only post my bail,
Because I cannot stop for Death.
Because I cannot stop for Death,
The Host of passage will oblige.
And thus shall quiet take my breath,
In disbelief must I abide.
Will I be running for a bus,
Because I cannot stop for Death.
Is there no other way for us,
To keep me from eternal rest?
I don’t believe in being blessed,
To have another chance at life.
Because I cannot stop for Death,
That waits to cut me like a knife.
The test I’m given will I fail,
I know I haven’t much time left.
If you could only post my bail,
Because I cannot stop for Death.
Written by
Jade-Pandora
(jade tiger)
Published 29th Dec 2018
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Re. Because I Cannot Stop For Death
29th Dec 2018 11:41am
Re: Re. Because I Cannot Stop For Death
I wish the reason for this piece was as simple as that.
Thanks for dropping by, SweetO.
Thanks for dropping by, SweetO.
Re. Because I Cannot Stop For Death
29th Dec 2018 11:55am
I love how the title walked down .... its very pleasing to look to , well structured :))
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Re: Re. Because I Cannot Stop For Death
29th Dec 2018 12:39pm
Why thank you, that’s the poetic form I used - a Quatern. And welcome to the Deep.
Re. Because I Cannot Stop For Death
29th Dec 2018 4:24pm
Excellent quatern! I dig this👏👏
Love this verse
"I don’t believe in being blessed,
To have another chance at life.
Because I cannot stop for Death,
That waits to cut me like a knife."
Evocative write! This is great👏👏
Love this verse
"I don’t believe in being blessed,
To have another chance at life.
Because I cannot stop for Death,
That waits to cut me like a knife."
Evocative write! This is great👏👏
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Re: Re. Because I Cannot Stop For Death
29th Dec 2018 5:57pm
I thank you, H.R., with much appreciation for such enthusiastic support.
~Jade
~Jade
Re. Because I Cannot Stop For Death
29th Dec 2018 11:54pm
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30th Dec 2018 00:03am
Re. Because I Cannot Stop For Death
1st Jan 2019 6:45am
You are a poet's poet, your ability must surely impress any who look to the craft with an eye for detail, talent and skill. This is beautifully honed and was such a joy to peruse. It slid with the silk of a cat's languor across my senses. Happy New Year. May your blessings be bounteous in joy, purpose and peace.
Daniel
Daniel
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Re: Re. Because I Cannot Stop For Death
1st Jan 2019 11:57am
Thank you very much, Daniel. The first moments into the new year seem to have robbed me of more than my baser vocabulary at this time.
Re. Because I Cannot Stop For Death
8th Feb 2019 1:33am
Very nicely put together. Great word usage, it had a few different emotions for me and I'm still thinking about it.
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Re: Re. Because I Cannot Stop For Death
8th Feb 2019 2:00am
Why thank you, Floem, and take your time to let the words & emotions “marry”.
Re. Because I Cannot Stop For Death
5th Apr 2020 7:09pm
Re: Re. Because I Cannot Stop For Death
Thank you so very much, NB. I thought I was hallucinating! (ie: huge # of entries, and it was two months after the comp closed for the vote to end... gave up waiting for an outcome, knew I didn’t have a chance, until I forgot which comp it even /was/... and now Sky is gone
🤕exhausted
But thank you like I said. Hang in there, brother.
🤕exhausted
But thank you like I said. Hang in there, brother.