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Turnabout
Dependent on her loyalty
He will insist that she obey
And take the stand of royalty
Claiming that she has little say
But she, it seems has other plans
And it is high time that he serves
Cool her nakedness, using fans
Then furnish her what she deserves
He lowers slowly to his knees
And tongues between her supple thighs
The deity now aims to please
And accept rigors that she supplies.
He will insist that she obey
And take the stand of royalty
Claiming that she has little say
But she, it seems has other plans
And it is high time that he serves
Cool her nakedness, using fans
Then furnish her what she deserves
He lowers slowly to his knees
And tongues between her supple thighs
The deity now aims to please
And accept rigors that she supplies.
Published 21st Dec 2018
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21st Dec 2018 11:42pm
Dependent on her loyalty
He will insist that she obey
And take the stand of royalty
these lines are a perfect way to open any poem
great one
He will insist that she obey
And take the stand of royalty
these lines are a perfect way to open any poem
great one
22nd Dec 2018 9:35pm
Those are my favorite lines too poetOftragedy. I'm glad you enjoyed this, You honor me.
Anonymous
22nd Dec 2018 1:22am
You always give another prospective on erotic scene. So the roles have been exchanged and both parts are satisfied. I hope to have seen right. Very good ink indeed my friend. J
22nd Dec 2018 9:41pm
You got this just fine, J. Your insight is right on. The roles are reversed to mutual satisfaction. I realize it doesn't really work this way with true BDSM. The roles remain the same. So this is just a personal fantasy, how I would even the balance. Seems only fair to me. Thank you!
22nd Dec 2018 7:06am
A bit of role reversal...very exciting thought and a great read. You are a master of rhymes.
22nd Dec 2018 9:47pm
The role reversal is to be desired, a fair balance in the play. The Dom and Sub should switch the positions of power, if only for the sake of variety. The safe word would still apply. Thank you Rjm!
22nd Dec 2018 1:49pm
dearest Sir Crow so very sexy
extremely titillating
and it made me giggle...
love Brenda 💕
extremely titillating
and it made me giggle...
love Brenda 💕
22nd Dec 2018 9:48pm
