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I Failed Youth
for now
that time alone
I crave in magnitude
and so
be you brilliant, moon gazer
yearning at your soul
of stings unseen
untangle
the web of my zodiac
disperse these moods
center me
enveloped in your midnight cold
yarn me moonbeams
of iridescence
ancients once told of
but I failed to show
and I lost my home
should I have known?
Published 13th Dec 2018
| Edited 8th Dec 2021
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Anonymous
13th Dec 2018 4:17pm
Enchanting & haunting in so few words.
15th Dec 2018 6:41pm
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15th Dec 2018 6:34pm
13th Dec 2018 9:38pm
Such wonderful penning enjoyed this great piece👏👏
"and so
be you brilliant, moon gazer
yearning at your soul
of stings unseen" beautifully said!👏👏
"and so
be you brilliant, moon gazer
yearning at your soul
of stings unseen" beautifully said!👏👏
15th Dec 2018 6:41pm
14th Dec 2018 3:37pm
Did you write this for one of your own children? Or a young friend, or perhaps a relative?
15th Dec 2018 6:39pm
I don’t have any kids. Although I feel this was written to my younger self.
In fact this just may be a conversation between my own inner essence of the Maiden, Mother, and Crone.
In fact this just may be a conversation between my own inner essence of the Maiden, Mother, and Crone.
15th Dec 2018 7:01pm
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16th Dec 2018 11:04pm
Thank you for sharing your thoughts Melia, quite enjoyed where this poem took you.
16th Dec 2018 6:29pm
Your detail and verbiage is alchemy, images within my mind's eye reaching into the ethereal. This is truly enchanting ink.
Daniel
Daniel
16th Dec 2018 11:05pm
Thank you for such kind remarks Daniel, and the RL add as well. Seems this one has had a hypnotic effect on readers.
23rd Dec 2018 1:05am
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