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Love Incarnate
cruelly I touched you
reached in with my sin
in the first realm of understanding
I knew you
in this life, we were cast to the seas
still, we found one another
a great unkindness
I'm not your age
you know me from the inside
recognize me in my words
see me in the silly smiles
of the girls, you reach for
with hopes, one would be like me
cruelty has refined who I am
from pain made beautiful
a godly work of art
I will return to the sea
to be formed again
I've known you since time first began
I will know you anew when it ends
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Re. Love Incarnate
Anonymous
12th Nov 2018 12:35pm
beautiful bren, lit by rainbows of frustration/pain
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12th Nov 2018 12:40pm
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12th Nov 2018 12:41pm
Re. Love Incarnate
12th Nov 2018 12:44pm
Always amazed by how these one liners sum up (not necessary reduce your entire poem) the whole piece. Clever.
cruelty has refined who I am
I felt that. Liked
cruelty has refined who I am
I felt that. Liked
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Re: Re. Love Incarnate
12th Nov 2018 12:46pm
thank you beautiful Nari for the love on this write and for my style...
you are deeply appreciated lovely one...
love Brenda 🌹
you are deeply appreciated lovely one...
love Brenda 🌹
Re. Love Incarnate
12th Nov 2018 1:00pm
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12th Nov 2018 1:01pm
thank you dearest Tim indeed we are a continual renewal of self... I love your vision of this write...
love Brenda ✨
love Brenda ✨
Re. Love Incarnate
12th Nov 2018 2:51pm
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14th Nov 2018 11:47am
Re. Love Incarnate
12th Nov 2018 5:04pm
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14th Nov 2018 11:48am
thank you graciously dearest Tallen I'm happy you felt this one...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. Love Incarnate
12th Nov 2018 6:17pm
Beautiful piece, the ocean is such an apt metaphor for the mistress that is love.
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14th Nov 2018 11:49am
Re. Love Incarnate
Anonymous
12th Nov 2018 8:38pm
Crimmy,
That's fantastic. Your words always bleed with the beauty, and the pain, that is you.
You're wonderful.
Matthew.
That's fantastic. Your words always bleed with the beauty, and the pain, that is you.
You're wonderful.
Matthew.
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Re: Re. Love Incarnate
14th Nov 2018 11:49am
thank you graciously dearest Matthew for the love for me and this write...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. Love Incarnate
12th Nov 2018 9:41pm
"From pain made beautiful." Hard experience can add wisdom to the eyes, character to the brow and sheer beauty in both form and face. Incandescent writing...
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14th Nov 2018 11:50am
Re. Love Incarnate
12th Nov 2018 9:57pm
Not everyone can turn pain and suffering into such beautiful words - may they travel far into the hearts and minds of others.
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14th Nov 2018 11:51am
thank you dearest Josh for such a lovely comment gifting me smiles...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
Re. Love Incarnate
Anonymous
14th Nov 2018 11:29am
Feel this deeply beautiful one <3
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14th Nov 2018 11:52am