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epiphany
trace the ache within the guilt
may it bleed truth
to be gathered in love's chalice
drink dear one and be filled
with hope of morrow's grace
the dawn bear witness to your beauty
deep inside pain's epiphany
see yourself through the looking glass of destiny
for you, my love are chosen
a path is set before you
one you must travel
your spirit broken
your kin will know you when they see you
shining light from deep within
wisdom creases your brow
honesty an elixir freely given
to those who seek true freedom
in celestial's keep
a light in the darkness you shall be
selah
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Re. epiphany
12th Nov 2018 2:27pm
this is a good one! good write !
love this line: see yourself through the looking glass of destiny
love this line: see yourself through the looking glass of destiny
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14th Nov 2018 11:53am
Re. epiphany
12th Nov 2018 2:32pm
Beautiful piece "trace the ache within the guilt
may it bleed truth " damn i felt that one great writing👏✌
may it bleed truth " damn i felt that one great writing👏✌
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Re: Re. epiphany
14th Nov 2018 11:54am
thank you graciously dearest Hunter for feeling this one so deeply...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. epiphany
12th Nov 2018 4:11pm
that's a heavy poem not so easily accessible, had to read it a few times actually..
trace the ache within the guilt
may it bleed truth
to be gathered in love's chalice
drink dear one and be filled
with hope of morrow's grace
Opening blew me down liked
trace the ache within the guilt
may it bleed truth
to be gathered in love's chalice
drink dear one and be filled
with hope of morrow's grace
Opening blew me down liked
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14th Nov 2018 11:54am
Re. epiphany
12th Nov 2018 7:34pm
The self-correcting principle of inductive reasoning.....accuracy is evolving with each new experience.....
Instead of this formula, you made it completely accessible.....to those who read metaphors....personal examples....and can extrapolate
from your experiences.
On their best days, that's what poems do.
Instead of this formula, you made it completely accessible.....to those who read metaphors....personal examples....and can extrapolate
from your experiences.
On their best days, that's what poems do.
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14th Nov 2018 11:55am
Re. epiphany
12th Nov 2018 7:48pm
"trace the ache within the guilt
may it bleed truth
to be gathered in love's chalice
drink dear one and be filled
with hope of morrow's grace"
oh my so very beautiful....what a lovely soul you are Crims...I fall for you each time
earthly hug
Jeff
may it bleed truth
to be gathered in love's chalice
drink dear one and be filled
with hope of morrow's grace"
oh my so very beautiful....what a lovely soul you are Crims...I fall for you each time
earthly hug
Jeff
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Re: Re. epiphany
14th Nov 2018 11:56am
thank you graciously dearest Jeff for such a lovely comment touching my heart and gifting me smiles...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
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Anonymous
- Edited 12th Nov 2018 8:58pm
12th Nov 2018 8:56pm
Oh my! How beautiful this is in its archaic flow. My dearest Brenda, you are a born poetess. Where have you reaped all this excellence? I am honoured to say,one day, to all those that will raise your name to the Olympus of poetry, that I knew your words from having read them first. I am not joking, I swear by my life. You are truly gifted, oh beautiful soul. Love always. J
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Re: Re. epiphany
14th Nov 2018 11:58am
aw thank you dearest Juvenalis beautiful soul what a gorgeous comment that moved me deeply...I can't express just how much...you show me so much love and I deeply appreciate you...
love & hugs...
Brenda 💕
love & hugs...
Brenda 💕
Re. epiphany
12th Nov 2018 9:15pm
Inspired work, Brenda. I love how you care so much for a man with a broken spirit. You're the healing force among the stars. This did strike me as an epiphany, one of many in your body of work.
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14th Nov 2018 11:59am
thank you graciously dearest Sir Crow this one is kind of funny in that I believe it's a deity speaking to all who would read...
I cherish you my friend and love your interpretation...
love Brenda 🌹
I cherish you my friend and love your interpretation...
love Brenda 🌹
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13th Nov 2018 00:35am
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Re: Re. epiphany
14th Nov 2018 12:00pm
thank you graciously dearest Tim for digging those lines gifting me smiles...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. epiphany
Anonymous
13th Nov 2018 3:50pm
You screech not a cannonade
but stretch the aegis of a
Arcadian whimper.
I am honored and blessed
to swim in your poetic ocean.
🌹
but stretch the aegis of a
Arcadian whimper.
I am honored and blessed
to swim in your poetic ocean.
🌹
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14th Nov 2018 12:01pm
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