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Deep in this underground
Amidst the frightening fetishes
Riddled within the rhymes
Between the diatribes of discontent
I’m finding a genuine grace
A fellowship of the fragmented
Souls unafraid of confessing brokenness
Holding my pieces together in the process
“Thank you”
Will never
Be
Enough
Author's Note
I'll probably keep saying it anyway
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5th Nov 2018 6:10pm
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5th Nov 2018 11:50pm
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5th Nov 2018 11:51pm
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5th Nov 2018 7:02pm
This is a beautiful way of showing your appreciation and admiration for the members of DUP. I enjoy reading your poems.
Well done!
Well done!
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5th Nov 2018 11:52pm
Thank you Luna - and back atcha!
Overwhelmed with the kindness I've been shown here, right when I needed it.
Overwhelmed with the kindness I've been shown here, right when I needed it.
Re. Poets
5th Nov 2018 7:17pm
indeed we are a community
Broken or otherwise, we support each other and the process
Great write
Broken or otherwise, we support each other and the process
Great write
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5th Nov 2018 11:53pm
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5th Nov 2018 7:38pm
Brava Titanium! This is an awesome affirmation of the lasting benefits of this friendship of poets! I intimately identify with this stanza:
"Souls unafraid of confessing brokenness
Holding my pieces together in the process "
"Souls unafraid of confessing brokenness
Holding my pieces together in the process "
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5th Nov 2018 11:56pm
Thank you GW!
I have needed that soul glue lately, and poets here have provided.... how can virtual ether-beings be so important to my sanity? I don't know, but I know it helps.
I have needed that soul glue lately, and poets here have provided.... how can virtual ether-beings be so important to my sanity? I don't know, but I know it helps.
Re. Poets
5th Nov 2018 8:29pm
I like your use of repeating words that start with the same letter, line by line. Overall great word choices to depict our little underground abode! Gratitude can bring much warmth to the darkest of days, so glad to share in this community with you and others alike. Keep writing bt, you’re appreciated =)
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Re: Re. Poets
6th Nov 2018 00:01am
You've warmed my heart, blue! Thank you! And thanks for noticing my word play.
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5th Nov 2018 10:00pm
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6th Nov 2018 7:41am
rendering the truth
of and about
many if not all here dear Poetess.
and doing that so deftly
it affects and effects
deeply so...
and the gratitude
is beyond words
for all and from all
of and about
many if not all here dear Poetess.
and doing that so deftly
it affects and effects
deeply so...
and the gratitude
is beyond words
for all and from all
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6th Nov 2018 3:59pm
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11th Nov 2018 2:11am
''Deep in this underground
Amidst the frightening fetishes
Riddled within the rhymes
Between the diatribes of discontent''
I could only smile at his part..
I get you..and I got this...
Amidst the frightening fetishes
Riddled within the rhymes
Between the diatribes of discontent''
I could only smile at his part..
I get you..and I got this...
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Re: Re. Poets
11th Nov 2018 2:23am
Thanks, Naaj.... I can tell you get me. Glad to bring a smile!
I think a lot of us share our uglies here... and that's what makes it so very beautiful.
I think a lot of us share our uglies here... and that's what makes it so very beautiful.