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.........Of Promises Broken
Promises......often broken
Truths, unrealized
Trails of lies and deceptions
bring tears and pain to jaded eyes
But as I look through the glass darkly
Sometimes it's hard to see
the manifestations of hurt-my pain
is rooted deeply inside of me......
Be warned however that the overly guarded heart and emotions will allow us to see things that are better left *unseen*
Things that will dash away hopes
Things that stifle all your dreams
Our hopes and dreams are all we are
When we loose them, the heart will surely die
Oh, if you only see through jaded eyes
Life and love will surely pass you by.
Truths, unrealized
Trails of lies and deceptions
bring tears and pain to jaded eyes
But as I look through the glass darkly
Sometimes it's hard to see
the manifestations of hurt-my pain
is rooted deeply inside of me......
Be warned however that the overly guarded heart and emotions will allow us to see things that are better left *unseen*
Things that will dash away hopes
Things that stifle all your dreams
Our hopes and dreams are all we are
When we loose them, the heart will surely die
Oh, if you only see through jaded eyes
Life and love will surely pass you by.
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So true...
4th Nov 2011 4:21pm
..dear MusicallyMrM, so true. Without dreams we are but cobwebs up the rafters, without hopes, we are sentinels in a deserted graveyard. Life and love will pass us by, if we did not live life, nor loved love. For these two are inter-twined.
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Yess...
I am capable of stepping out of my anguish to hear wisdom when it is being spoken. A beautifully sad piece brother M.
Gypsy red
Gypsy red
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Jaded Eyes
4th Nov 2011 5:09pm
Painful poem so masterfully written..
Promises......often broken
Truths, unrealized
Trails of lies and deceptions
bring tears and pain to jaded eyes
But as I look through the glass darkly
Sometimes it's hard to see
the manifestations of hurt-my pain
is rooted deeply inside of me......
brilliant and insightful..peace Crim
Promises......often broken
Truths, unrealized
Trails of lies and deceptions
bring tears and pain to jaded eyes
But as I look through the glass darkly
Sometimes it's hard to see
the manifestations of hurt-my pain
is rooted deeply inside of me......
brilliant and insightful..peace Crim
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re: Broken...
Anonymous
4th Nov 2011 5:44pm
MusicallyMrM,
So true, so true....Great write.
tornado
So true, so true....Great write.
tornado
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Very insightful
4th Nov 2011 7:04pm
Trails of lies and deception
bring tears and pain to jaded eyes...
I have been there...You put the feelings into words beautifully!
bring tears and pain to jaded eyes...
I have been there...You put the feelings into words beautifully!
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<3
6th Nov 2011 7:29pm
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Anonymous
7th Nov 2011 1:11am
so touching MusicallyMrM,beautiful!
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Amazing Job!
9th Nov 2011 4:38pm
Anonymous
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13th Nov 2011 8:49am
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WHEN THE MOST IMPORTANT PROMISES..
Anonymous
29th Nov 2011 8:43pm
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Outstanding
26th Mar 2012 2:54am
The individual and society. The connection is so well stated here.
"the manifestations of hurt-my pain
is rooted deeply inside of me......" doesn't get more real then this!
A classic for the ages!
"the manifestations of hurt-my pain
is rooted deeply inside of me......" doesn't get more real then this!
A classic for the ages!
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terrific
27th Apr 2012 5:31pm
I love this poem. It is very well defined...And I can definitely truly relate to it. Outstanding!!!
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re: terrific
27th Apr 2012 6:05pm
Thank you for reading this. Sometimes the words of others can prevent you from traversing a similar path..........
Re: .........Of Promises Broken
13th Jun 2012 5:37am
Such a beautiful message in this piece. Cleverly written! Awesome poem! :-)
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