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Killing Me Softly With His Song
Killing me softly with his song
Stroking of his lyrics playing my body all night long
Sweet tunes staining my heart, beautiful melodies resonate as I moaned
Surrendering unto the rhythmic drum beats as he murmured and groaned
Love notes gently caressing over my tender skin
Crescendo of his instrumental yearnings sinking as our symphonic love begins
Enrapture of no classical end
Entangled bodies, playing sheet music of love, passion hitting high notes
Orchestral desires, ecstasy afloat
Conductor wave your baton around and around
Souls envelop of such harmonic beautiful sounds
His body sinking, riding
Mine gliding
Speaking into the microphone of my heart, ballads of pearly streams
A concert of playing the essence of my creamy butter rum dreams
Killing me softly with his song
Stroking of his lyrics playing my body all night long
Sweet tunes staining my heart, beautiful melodies resonate as I moaned
Surrendering unto the rhythmic drum beats as he murmured and groaned
Love notes gently caressing over my tender skin
Crescendo of his instrumental yearnings sinking as our symphonic love begins
Enrapture of no classical end
Entangled bodies, playing sheet music of love, passion hitting high notes
Orchestral desires, ecstasy afloat
Conductor wave your baton around and around
Souls envelop of such harmonic beautiful sounds
His body sinking, riding
Mine gliding
Speaking into the microphone of my heart, ballads of pearly streams
A concert of playing the essence of my creamy butter rum dreams
Killing me softly with his song
Published 16th Oct 2018
Author's Note
To practice your scales, so to speak, in order play the symphony, is what you have to do as a young poet.
Rita Dove
Rita Dove
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16th Oct 2018 3:59am
This is more a Lauryn Hill or Al B Sure flow and its smooth. You're so excruciating.
16th Oct 2018 4:07am
You are very good, I was listening to AL B Sure when I was writing this, I was trying to capture the feelings and essence of the song in general, but reversed it to my benefit my emotions…have a great evening love😊
16th Oct 2018 4:50am
17th Oct 2018 5:30am
With us, always an encore performance in a hotel suite. Thanks for reading and commenting
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17th Oct 2018 12:57pm
Aww...you are too kind to say that. Thank you for reading and commenting. Enjoy the reminder of your day.
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16th Oct 2018 6:47am
When I saw the pic wondered what singer it might be - Enrique Iglesias? (Now happily living and dad of twins with Anna Kournikova.)
Like the mix of musical metaphors, one kind of performance made suggestive of another kind. Tempted to LOL at this line:
Conductor wave your baton around and around......
His body sinking, riding
Mine gliding
On the whole, good performance of a poem.
Like the mix of musical metaphors, one kind of performance made suggestive of another kind. Tempted to LOL at this line:
Conductor wave your baton around and around......
His body sinking, riding
Mine gliding
On the whole, good performance of a poem.
17th Oct 2018 1:06pm
My king, where art thou my king. The man who provides my energetic mind with such intellectual information. Thank you for reading and then commenting. Have a great day.
Anonymous
16th Oct 2018 6:37pm
Beautiful !
17th Oct 2018 1:01pm
Why thank you love for taking the time to read me over and apply such an uplifting adjective. Have a great day handsome one:-)
22nd Oct 2018 6:03am
Reading thru your stuff and well written I might add and then coming across two that have song references to them and I am a musician so I had to read. Afternoon delight yes that is always a good thing. As I was reading this one as well the tune was spinning thru my head so thanks for writing and also for a soundtrack to them as well.
22nd Oct 2018 11:09am
Good morning, thank you for taking the time to read and then commenting. I tend to find some of my greatest inspiration through music, mainly if you are trying to capture the artist's true emotions of any song and then mentally convey it in a poem:-)
