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Divinity
She likes the feeling of his hand
Applied with each slight transgression
She gets down on knees, his pleasure
And sucks mewling her confession
He then ordains to enter her
Soon driving deep between taut thighs
She consents to call him "Sir"
And avoid the romantic lies
But she moans love, every thrust
His being this year's chosen god
He insists upon her total trust
Or her ass reddened by the rod
She agrees to let him have his way
With her god exhibiting his strength
When she once more kneels down to pray
And then consumes his divine length.
Applied with each slight transgression
She gets down on knees, his pleasure
And sucks mewling her confession
He then ordains to enter her
Soon driving deep between taut thighs
She consents to call him "Sir"
And avoid the romantic lies
But she moans love, every thrust
His being this year's chosen god
He insists upon her total trust
Or her ass reddened by the rod
She agrees to let him have his way
With her god exhibiting his strength
When she once more kneels down to pray
And then consumes his divine length.
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Re. Divinity
4th Oct 2018 6:18pm
It's religion, Crow, it's religion!
I applaude you on the content, the fow and the formatting... such a great write!
I applaude you on the content, the fow and the formatting... such a great write!
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4th Oct 2018 6:30pm
I have no actual experience with BDSM so I always feel a little insecure writing about it. I just glean from stories and those questionable "Grey" movies. Thanks so much for the kind words and RL entry Duende!
Re. Divinity
4th Oct 2018 6:31pm
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4th Oct 2018 6:43pm
I'm really not one to wield a rod or claim divinity. Far from it. Thank you LilDragonFly!
Re. Divinity
4th Oct 2018 6:51pm
Well captured moment!
You might have a gift dear Crow. Should you decide to dip into the pool of respectable deviants you have more than one willing to show you the ropes or help you wield the rod.
You might have a gift dear Crow. Should you decide to dip into the pool of respectable deviants you have more than one willing to show you the ropes or help you wield the rod.
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Re: Re. Divinity
4th Oct 2018 7:00pm
I just might take you up on that Bonzi. I've written about BDSM here but am an ignoramus. DeSade probably isn't the best example. Thank you!
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4th Oct 2018 7:12pm
DeSade is my all time favorite deviate!! "Juliette" being the first of his writing I had ever read, remains my favorite. Besides, how can you not like a man that inspired the "S" in BDSM!
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Re: Re. Divinity
4th Oct 2018 7:39pm
Once again a point of my ignorance. I have never actually read DeSade and only know what I see in the movies. I hear "Juliette" is a masterpiece from you and others. I also hear Sacher=Masoch is worth at least a look. I hope I didn't denigrate one of your favorites.
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4th Oct 2018 7:53pm
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Anonymous
4th Oct 2018 7:31pm
My dear friend, you are a painter. You (as I) don't truly know, first hand about BDSM, but let me tell you that you are a formidable observer. You did a great job here my friend. J.
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4th Oct 2018 7:44pm
I may be a voyeur as well, not much of an active participant. I understand there's quite a gathering of BDSM aficionados and participants at DUP. I hope I don't step on any toes.
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Anonymous
4th Oct 2018 7:56pm
Looking can do no harm. I'm sure. Looking is learning. I'm not much into BDSM, as I said. But I do have a naughty mind! Very naughty, I been told. And it gets worse with age. 😂 J
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Re. Divinity
5th Oct 2018 11:57am
Erotica, you are getting good at it. Inspired as always eh:) good read Crowfly.
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