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Mother Nature erupts with a crack!
Thunder rumbles through the tree tops
of Her desperate femme fingers,
while leaves flutter and whip wild
in the winds of Her heaving breath.
Her heart bursts from the Earth
with a sizzling pure white voltage!
The echoes of Her making love to the Sky...
as rain cools them in a silky wet embrace.
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Published 19th Sep 2018
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19th Sep 2018 1:53am
goodness...what a breathtaking expression NBB.
twice today am feeling the shortage of my RL being full.
striking, the imagery
the delivery.
joy, the read.
thank. you.
twice today am feeling the shortage of my RL being full.
striking, the imagery
the delivery.
joy, the read.
thank. you.
20th Sep 2018 11:19pm
Thank you my friend, your remarks serve just as humbling as an RL add 🙏 I’m glad you enjoyed this so!
24th Sep 2018 6:20pm
19th Sep 2018 3:57am
20th Sep 2018 11:20pm
"The echoes of Her making love to the Sky...
as rain cools them in a silky wet embrace."
really love this...
Jeff
as rain cools them in a silky wet embrace."
really love this...
Jeff
20th Sep 2018 11:21pm
19th Sep 2018 6:49am
Mother Nature's overflow. Will see storms and whirlwinds in another light.
20th Sep 2018 11:22pm
19th Sep 2018 1:19pm
20th Sep 2018 11:24pm
If nature isn’t but a dance of such romance, this serves to show it as such. Thank you Tim =)
19th Sep 2018 10:25pm
20th Sep 2018 11:25pm
Excellent metaphorically reflective piece, Gem. Enjoyed what the imagery evoked.
20th Sep 2018 11:26pm
24th Sep 2018 4:25pm
Wonderful contrast ... violent eruption ... into lovemaking ... then ... the closing line ... awesome poeting ...
24th Sep 2018 6:17pm
24th Sep 2018 5:09pm
24th Sep 2018 6:19pm
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- Edited 23rd Aug 2019 11:45pm
26th Sep 2018 1:07pm
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