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child of the seventies
I grew up in the seventies
man I miss the feeling in the air
it was the feeling of freedom
I lived in a small neighborhood
never remember an adult it was just us kids
disco on the radio...
collecting pop bottles for rollerskating
Saturday Night Fever at the theaters
the adults talked in hushed tones
and whispers about this film
shag carpeting, wood-paneled dens
us kids would play all day
swimming at the neighborhood pool
innocent kisses were stolen by a streetlight
then I said I have to go
Buck Rogers is on
and I can't miss love boat
Dorthy Hamel haircuts
dancing in polyester slacks
man, we were slick
somewhere as in all stories,
there is a monster...we had ours
Ted Bundy hunt the night
one night my older sisters...
wanted to cruise the Blvd.
so they put lip gloss on me
and had me sit on a pillow
it was so much fun
being grown up for a night
now I wish I could go back...
to the seventies
to be a kid again...
bell bottom blues got to me today
sigh, take me back...
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Re. child of the seventies
18th Sep 2018 11:39pm
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18th Sep 2018 11:45pm
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Re: Re. child of the seventies
18th Sep 2018 11:46pm
it just seemed like there was a different feel in the air thank you dearest Tim for going there with me today even if it's just in our thoughts...
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. child of the seventies
18th Sep 2018 11:49pm
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Anonymous
18th Sep 2018 11:55pm
Funny, dear Brenda, I was thinking of that just tonight. It has been 38 years since I left the the States, moving to Italy with my family. Now 8 years in Britain. I've seen a lot of things and I miss those days in New York, growing up, only child and having a lot of dreams and ambitions. All gone. In a few minutes, it will be midnight here and I am another year older. To much for some, not enough for me. I have regrets and melancholy. I've missed out on a lot things. As an only child, with strict Italian parents, I couldn't do much. So I poured myself over books and studies. That was my only true self and my only fun. I grew up a nerd and a fool and now I have nothing much. But I swear if I could, I'd go back. Thank you for this gift of memory lane, my sweet. Hope you are better today. Hugs and love to you. J
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Re: Re. child of the seventies
23rd Sep 2018 3:33pm
thank you dearest Juvenalis I'm happy this brought back good memories for you as it did me writing it...
I deeply appreciate you beautiful soul 🌹
love Brenda
I deeply appreciate you beautiful soul 🌹
love Brenda
Re. child of the seventies
19th Sep 2018 00:00am
I kind of fell apart in the '70s but it had its moments. I did succumb to the disco craze, briefly. This still creates nostalgia beautifully, and helps me forget the darkness I found in the decade. Thank you Brenda!
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Re: Re. child of the seventies
23rd Sep 2018 3:35pm
thank you dearest Sir Crow I'm sad for your hard days back then... I'm happy that you felt some of what I experienced then 💕
love Brenda
love Brenda
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Re: Re. child of the seventies
23rd Sep 2018 3:36pm
thank you dearest Bender for feeling this a reminder of when we were young 🌹
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. child of the seventies
19th Sep 2018 00:27am
I had long long hair and wore a uniform:
At school, I always wore an Izod Lacoste Crocodile sweater.
To dress up, it was a brushed denim leisure suit.
<shiver>
At school, I always wore an Izod Lacoste Crocodile sweater.
To dress up, it was a brushed denim leisure suit.
<shiver>
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Re: Re. child of the seventies
23rd Sep 2018 3:36pm
thank you dearest Reggie for sharing your own experience of that time with me 💕
love Brenda
love Brenda
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23rd Sep 2018 3:37pm
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19th Sep 2018 2:18am
Re: Re. child of the seventies
23rd Sep 2018 3:38pm
thank you dearest Poet I'm sure you were sexy then as you are now ❤
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. child of the seventies
19th Sep 2018 3:07am
'gonna take a sentimental journey....' - wonderful reminiscence Brenda...you are sounding calmer...I'm happy about that....
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23rd Sep 2018 3:38pm
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Anonymous
19th Sep 2018 4:01am
Crimmy! Love your memories and reminiscing! You paint a beautiful scene that takes us all there. The joys and mysteries of youth. Too bad we have to grow up(Holden Caufield lol).
Love ya,
Matthew.
Love ya,
Matthew.
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Re: Re. child of the seventies
23rd Sep 2018 3:41pm
thank you dearest Matthew you know I love when you call me Crimmy lol... loved the quote too...
I truly appreciate you beautiful soul 🌹
love Brenda
I truly appreciate you beautiful soul 🌹
love Brenda
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Anonymous
23rd Sep 2018 8:34pm
Crimmy! I'm glad you said that, because I like that as my nickname for you, but I wasn't sure if you liked it. You just get better and better.
Thank you my friend!
Love,
Matthew.
Thank you my friend!
Love,
Matthew.
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Re. child of the seventies
19th Sep 2018 5:08am
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23rd Sep 2018 3:41pm
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19th Sep 2018 6:13am
Re: Re. child of the seventies
23rd Sep 2018 3:42pm
thank you dearest Augustomni for journeys back with me... aw the 90's you're so young 💕
love Brenda
love Brenda
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Anonymous
19th Sep 2018 2:05pm
The 70's...I'm trying to think where I would have been then...mostly running back-roads and hiding in the forest, I imagine. A mixed bag of memories. Definitely a different era and energy. Bringing smiles to my face this morning, beautiful Dark Angel. I love you :-)
...ever your Willow
...ever your Willow
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Re: Re. child of the seventies
23rd Sep 2018 3:43pm
thank you beautiful Willow hiding in the forest and me up in a tree sounds beautiful 💕
I love you beautiful lady...
love Brenda
I love you beautiful lady...
love Brenda
Re. child of the seventies
19th Sep 2018 10:20pm
Nice nostalgia
1970s - the last decade of social mobility before Thatcher/Reagan killed it all.
Did you see this I posted the other day? https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/320216-at-seventeen/
1970s - the last decade of social mobility before Thatcher/Reagan killed it all.
Did you see this I posted the other day? https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/320216-at-seventeen/
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Re: Re. child of the seventies
23rd Sep 2018 3:44pm
thank you dearest Josh no I haven't forgive me for my tardy reply I've been out of it... i'll check it now...
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. child of the seventies
20th Sep 2018 4:03am
What a wonderland of vivid memories which make me pine for that time when i grew up. Your talent shines here as you bring back a galaxy long long ago and far far away. This is even more amazing that what I've read by you so far. I am a groupie of yours now. This is as good as it gets. ;-)
XOXOXO
John
XOXOXO
John
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Re: Re. child of the seventies
23rd Sep 2018 3:39pm
aw John you make me blush thank you so happy this brought back good vibes ✨
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. child of the seventies
20th Sep 2018 9:44am
I was born in 1976...so don't really have clear memories of the 70's...but great era
for music and films...
for music and films...
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Re: Re. child of the seventies
23rd Sep 2018 3:46pm
thank you dearest Dark Sun for taking this sentimental journey with me ✨
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. child of the seventies
20th Sep 2018 10:50am
A lovely tribute to the era. Even though I was born in 74, there is something truly magical about that decade.
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Re: Re. child of the seventies
23rd Sep 2018 3:47pm
thank you dearest Tender One you're so young still I deeply appreciate you journeying with me 🌹
love Brenda
love Brenda
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23rd Sep 2018 9:57pm
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