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melancholy's Brenda
melancholy has come to visit me again
in shades of blue, she greets me
says finally you will know me
and the reasons I come to you
Brenda is brand new...
the woman you never understood
delicate creature. fierce in strength
she stood against the darkness
her heart saw you through to today
she is the writer inside you
she's been writing letters to you daily
she is your soul
with no need for substances
selfish and greedy is your flesh
give it to me now
instant gratification
it will be no more
you must control this part of you
your body...
but a container for the soul
it cannot rule...
listen to your quiet voice
it will direct you to what is right
this is a fight, one for your life
a future is promised to you
bright and shining
there are people waiting to meet you
this is your destiny, this is fate
don't be afraid of what is before you
come, greet me
my name is Brenda...
it's time you knew me
Author's Note
i've battled substance abuse since I was seventeen the real Brenda is a mystery to me...getting clean now I'm introduced to my true soul...
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Re. melancholy's Brenda
Anonymous
14th Sep 2018 5:54pm
My God Crimmy!! You are one fantastic writer! And you just keep getting better!! It's not fair! lol.(It's not fair, but it's a good thing).
Your true soul is absolutely glorious!
I'm happy for you.
Love,
Matthew.
Your true soul is absolutely glorious!
I'm happy for you.
Love,
Matthew.
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Anonymous
23rd Sep 2018 8:45pm
🌹🌹🌹🌹🍕(sorry, I was getting hungry) 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹!!
Matthew.
Matthew.
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Re. melancholy's Brenda
14th Sep 2018 6:38pm
You're a woman of many facets, all of them fascinating. This is an honest, clear eyed write on how I think you wish to be perceived. Your cosmic fantasies and looks back on a difficult life are enthralling, but this seems a balance of extremes, including the drug problems. I believe this is the real you, and Brenda is magnificent.
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Re: Re. melancholy's Brenda
23rd Sep 2018 3:05pm
thank you dearest Sir Crow for embracing all sides of me continually ✨
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. melancholy's Brenda
14th Sep 2018 6:46pm
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23rd Sep 2018 3:05pm
Re. melancholy's Brenda
Anonymous
14th Sep 2018 6:56pm
The Brenda u were meant to be...
I believe in you...and I'm proud of you my dear
Always:)
I believe in you...and I'm proud of you my dear
Always:)
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23rd Sep 2018 3:06pm
Re. melancholy's Brenda
14th Sep 2018 7:20pm
The real Brenda is a force to be reckoned with...
Beautiful write as always.
Dark Sun.
Beautiful write as always.
Dark Sun.
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23rd Sep 2018 3:07pm
Re. melancholy's Brenda
14th Sep 2018 8:06pm
Brenda is brand new...
the woman you never understood
delicate creature. fierce in strength
she stood against the darkness
her heart saw you through to today
she is the writer inside you
she's been writing letters to you daily
she is your soul
with no need for substances
Tearfully i say i love you dear dear beautiful woman!
wow what a stunner...
(((((((((((((((((((((((Brenda))))))))))))))))))))))
loves you dearly honey..
i appreciate the relase of these honest words from the heart mind body and soul..
Write on sistah!
with love
Jackie Xxxx
the woman you never understood
delicate creature. fierce in strength
she stood against the darkness
her heart saw you through to today
she is the writer inside you
she's been writing letters to you daily
she is your soul
with no need for substances
Tearfully i say i love you dear dear beautiful woman!
wow what a stunner...
(((((((((((((((((((((((Brenda))))))))))))))))))))))
loves you dearly honey..
i appreciate the relase of these honest words from the heart mind body and soul..
Write on sistah!
with love
Jackie Xxxx
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23rd Sep 2018 3:07pm
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23rd Sep 2018 3:08pm
Re. melancholy's Brenda
14th Sep 2018 10:56pm
It is beautiful when an artist will leave artifice to the side and just pour naked onto the page. Vulnerability holds power, one of many paradoxes in this curiously crafted paradigm.
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Re: Re. melancholy's Brenda
23rd Sep 2018 3:09pm
thank you dearest Daniel for seeing me in this write and embracing me ✨
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. melancholy's Brenda
15th Sep 2018 00:42am
There are moments when it's time to step from the stage and sit in the audience.
Reflect, connect, and correct.
Welcome to the gallery of Brenda, dear poetess
Reflect, connect, and correct.
Welcome to the gallery of Brenda, dear poetess
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Re: Re. melancholy's Brenda
23rd Sep 2018 3:10pm
thank you beautiful Teri you're so right I've spent the last week simply listening 💕
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. melancholy's Brenda
15th Sep 2018 7:26am
Dearest Brenda,
The vulnerability in this piece left me speechless...
"it will direct you to what is right
this is a fight, one for your life" > being in a similar position I felt this one deeply.
Thank you for sharing... love you, lady!
Duende
The vulnerability in this piece left me speechless...
"it will direct you to what is right
this is a fight, one for your life" > being in a similar position I felt this one deeply.
Thank you for sharing... love you, lady!
Duende
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23rd Sep 2018 3:11pm
thank you beautiful Duende for feeling this write so deeply lovely lady ✨
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. melancholy's Brenda
15th Sep 2018 5:10pm
When Brenda was new she thought substance was strong, then Brenda understand that she is the strongest substance....... Inspired
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23rd Sep 2018 3:11pm
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23rd Sep 2018 3:12pm
Re. melancholy's Brenda
17th Sep 2018 00:26am
I believe in you ... next month it will be ten years sober ... I too started at 17 ... one day at a time ... thank you for being so brave ...
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23rd Sep 2018 3:13pm
thank you beautiful Dragonfly congratulation on ten years sober i'm feeling stronger and stronger 🌹
I deeply appreciate the support...
love Brenda
I deeply appreciate the support...
love Brenda
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23rd Sep 2018 3:14pm
Thanks ... we addicts need to support each other ... for only we truly understand the struggle ...
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23rd Sep 2018 3:16pm
thank you beautiful Dragonfly I hope someday if by only example I can help the meth addicts who became my friends 💕
love you lady...
Brenda
love you lady...
Brenda
Re. melancholy's Brenda
21st Sep 2018 2:57am
I love this journey described, and the amazing hope that overcomes,
'she is the writer inside you
she's been writing letters to you daily
she is your soul '
I love anything with rebirth, and this seems to embody it..
'she is the writer inside you
she's been writing letters to you daily
she is your soul '
I love anything with rebirth, and this seems to embody it..
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23rd Sep 2018 3:14pm
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23rd Sep 2018 3:15pm
thank you beautiful Daniella I've missed you so happy to see you back...
love you lady 💕
love Brenda
love you lady 💕
love Brenda
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