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Puppet
Broken people
make good puppets
With broken bones
and broken spine
there is no strength
to hold yourself up
so you need the guy with the strings
to keep you straight
for you will collapse by yourself
Don't let anybody break you
make good puppets
With broken bones
and broken spine
there is no strength
to hold yourself up
so you need the guy with the strings
to keep you straight
for you will collapse by yourself
Don't let anybody break you
Published 20th Aug 2018
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20th Aug 2018 10:42pm
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21st Aug 2018 7:29pm
I don't want to be anyone's puppet.. cut the strings and you'll only get stronger.
21st Aug 2018 7:40pm
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- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
21st Aug 2018 11:04pm
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Thank you Timagination. You don't want to call on a puppet master for help. It comes with a price....there is always an agenda.
5th Sep 2018 9:42pm
Yep, so true, and said crisply in so few words ... the whole system from cradle to grave is set up to turn people into sheeple.
5th Sep 2018 10:22pm
9th Sep 2018 4:33pm
Love the poem! I wonder if "guy with the strings" could be replaced with "puppeteer"-- might flow a little more. Great central imagery. Thanks!
9th Sep 2018 4:47pm
Thank you commenting and adding this poem to your list. I will give your suggestion some thought.
