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Shark Bait
What Was In That Sentence ?
Did I Smell Repentance ?
Or Was That Day Old Embarrassment
Stinking Up Your Studio Apartment ,
Like An Old Pair Of Shoes Tongues Wagging
Needing A Lacing Before They Start Bragging
Like Your Loose Lips Flapping In The Wind ,
Just Needing A Shut Up Before You Begin ;
What Were We Talking About And More So Why ?
I Know Every Time You Open Your Trap You Lie
So Why Did I Bother , Why Do I Seek To Perpetuate
This Cycle Where You Use Words As Thinker's Bait
Or A Fool Sticking His Head In The Jaws Of A Shark
Thank Goddess Your Bite Is Less Sharp Than Your Bark !
Did I Smell Repentance ?
Or Was That Day Old Embarrassment
Stinking Up Your Studio Apartment ,
Like An Old Pair Of Shoes Tongues Wagging
Needing A Lacing Before They Start Bragging
Like Your Loose Lips Flapping In The Wind ,
Just Needing A Shut Up Before You Begin ;
What Were We Talking About And More So Why ?
I Know Every Time You Open Your Trap You Lie
So Why Did I Bother , Why Do I Seek To Perpetuate
This Cycle Where You Use Words As Thinker's Bait
Or A Fool Sticking His Head In The Jaws Of A Shark
Thank Goddess Your Bite Is Less Sharp Than Your Bark !
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Re. Shark Bait
15th Aug 2018 11:51pm
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16th Aug 2018 00:09am
Re. Shark Bait
16th Aug 2018 00:19am
I've read your best but this ain't one of them blackwolf
but it's still and awesome write...
that last line reminds me of broly vs vegita to quote broly to vegita "you,re all talk but no bite, prince of all saiyans"
but it's still and awesome write...
that last line reminds me of broly vs vegita to quote broly to vegita "you,re all talk but no bite, prince of all saiyans"
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Re: Re. Shark Bait
16th Aug 2018 00:29am
O , that *almost* sounds like a challenge ,
within a compliment my friend !
You want to see my best ?
Keep watchin' and readin' ;
But you better wear your flameproof suit ,
unless you want to get burned...
I have been putting my creativity into carving
antler pieces for a fair this weekend coming...
But if you are calling me out to do better...
Watch out for what is coming , when my full
attention is applied...No lie , get ready for a fire dance with Words !
within a compliment my friend !
You want to see my best ?
Keep watchin' and readin' ;
But you better wear your flameproof suit ,
unless you want to get burned...
I have been putting my creativity into carving
antler pieces for a fair this weekend coming...
But if you are calling me out to do better...
Watch out for what is coming , when my full
attention is applied...No lie , get ready for a fire dance with Words !
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16th Aug 2018 00:31am
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16th Aug 2018 00:39am
You should know I love you...;)
But I also love a dare !
( My first dare got me arrested at 16 ,
when I climbed a telephone pole with
no pants on after drinking a bottle of
experimental 18% wine , then pissing
on the cop who came to arrest me )
Yeah...I be bad when dared...get ready , my friend !
But I also love a dare !
( My first dare got me arrested at 16 ,
when I climbed a telephone pole with
no pants on after drinking a bottle of
experimental 18% wine , then pissing
on the cop who came to arrest me )
Yeah...I be bad when dared...get ready , my friend !
Re: Re. Shark Bait
16th Aug 2018 00:43am
I find those that I love to be more entertaining when they're are drunk
cause they wont be holding back
cause they wont be holding back
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16th Aug 2018 00:46am
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16th Aug 2018 00:56am
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Anonymous
16th Aug 2018 4:09am
Oh, Blackwolf you just bring the creative magic every single time. "Or A Fool Sticking His Head In The Jaws Of A Shark "...absolutely brilliant!
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Re: Re. Shark Bait
16th Aug 2018 4:50am
Thank You , Lady Ally...
I hear you have rather large sharks in those waters...
If that is right , I would not want to be *that * fool !
I hear you have rather large sharks in those waters...
If that is right , I would not want to be *that * fool !
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Anonymous
16th Aug 2018 4:57am
Oh yes the biggest scariest sharks in these waters darling😣
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Re. Shark Bait
16th Aug 2018 10:48pm
Such a fool deserves to lose his noggin, be referred to as "chum", no buddy of yours. Excellent write Blackwolf,
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