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fools gold
loyalty is fools gold
it glitters in the sun
but the lacks the weight of true gold
it's washed away by the tides
so it is with your love
given and then within withdrawn
saddened I walk away
bankrupt
Published 15th Aug 2018
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15th Aug 2018 6:36pm
15th Aug 2018 6:39pm
thank you RJM though this isn't unrequited love it's something close more of an investment of trust in people...
I appreciate your thoughts...
love Crim
I appreciate your thoughts...
love Crim
15th Aug 2018 6:41pm
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Anonymous
15th Aug 2018 7:05pm
I echo what Tim said, gorgeous. If it isn't real, drop it and keep digging. Don't waste energy on false treasures. I love you
...ever your Willow
...ever your Willow
15th Aug 2018 7:09pm
thank you beautiful Willow for your insight on this write and for showing me love on it :)
I love you...
love Brenda
I love you...
love Brenda
15th Aug 2018 7:24pm
Difficult to know who to trust these days...I am building walls around myself again.
Nice write Crim.
Nice write Crim.
15th Aug 2018 7:38pm
thank you dearest Dark Sun I understand keep being true to yourself...
love Crim
love Crim
15th Aug 2018 8:05pm
'fools gold', iron pyrites produces a spark when struck, so ultimately has an immensely valuable and useful property...short lived but intense...
15th Aug 2018 8:17pm
thank you dearest Lawrence i'm smiling a wry smile you are so wise...
love Brenda
love Brenda
15th Aug 2018 8:18pm
The bankruptcy is heartbreaking. Brief, to the point, and powerful work, Crim.
15th Aug 2018 8:21pm
thank you dearest Sir Crow but always file chapter 11 and be on with it :)
I deeply appreciate your visits...
love Crim
I deeply appreciate your visits...
love Crim
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16th Aug 2018 7:28am
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16th Aug 2018 6:21pm
thank you dearest Bender yeah sometimes we get bedazzled and forget this truth...
I deeply appreciate your thoughts...
love Brenda
I deeply appreciate your thoughts...
love Brenda
16th Aug 2018 6:57pm
most shiny pretty things are poison....always look at them from your rear view...
16th Aug 2018 7:04pm
