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Practiced Ways
I let go of practiced ways
The usual routine
Rhyme and structure fading fast
But letting go is awfully slow
Just let me take the freest form
No trite tricks to catch the eye
Experience takes precedence
And is offered to an open mind
Better to simply let it flow
Not submit to formal drives
Do I have something left to say?
Not too sure, but here I stay.
The usual routine
Rhyme and structure fading fast
But letting go is awfully slow
Just let me take the freest form
No trite tricks to catch the eye
Experience takes precedence
And is offered to an open mind
Better to simply let it flow
Not submit to formal drives
Do I have something left to say?
Not too sure, but here I stay.
Author's Note
Just trying something a little different. Not "moving on" necessarily...
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Re. Practiced Ways
2nd Aug 2018 9:16pm
dearest Sir Crow love the natural
flow and rhythm to this...
it's goes with the words :)
love Crim
flow and rhythm to this...
it's goes with the words :)
love Crim
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Re: Re. Practiced Ways
2nd Aug 2018 9:24pm
Thanks Crim. Didn't tell a story, or not much of one, this time. I think I should try to break my usual patterns, at least to some extent.
Re. Practiced Ways
2nd Aug 2018 9:53pm
I love how you handled the witty & ironic end of this piece, my friend.., and you included the perfect image!
Jadey x
Jadey x
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Re: Re. Practiced Ways
2nd Aug 2018 10:56pm
Thanks Jadey. I was wondering about those last two lines. I'm glad they worked for you!
Re. Practiced Ways
2nd Aug 2018 11:54pm
Sir Crow! Some of the adieu-sounding words scared me...but I got better. I still love a good rhymer. Because I love music I love that tonic flow. Sometimes I find my need to write too urgent to bother with rhyme but when time permits I ;love the challenge.
Bravo on this freeform piece I look forward to reading more.
Bravo on this freeform piece I look forward to reading more.
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Re: Re. Practiced Ways
3rd Aug 2018 00:27am
Thanks Gahdess. I have by no means given up on rhyme, and syllable count when I can. All part of the fun.
Re. Practiced Ways
3rd Aug 2018 00:39am
I’d like to think my off beat somwhat rhyming recent poem influenced this write lol a poignant poem this is :)
I get tired of the same old rhyme schemes too...
Big like Crow
Hugs
Jackie
I get tired of the same old rhyme schemes too...
Big like Crow
Hugs
Jackie
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Re: Re. Practiced Ways
3rd Aug 2018 1:02am
Thanks Jackie. I find it more difficult to write free form than rhyme. Wish I could just go wild, do something really dynamic, without the formalities.
Re: Re. Practiced Ways
My crowfly friend, you know how I go with the flow of my muse each day, and how I go from free verse to syllable-count & rhyme schemes, and Eastetn short form in any variety & permutation. But it doesn’t just happen, and I never learned what I know of the arts through formal training that I never had. I’ve grown & evolved over years of hands-on practice. So too you, my friend, have been learning.
What I’m honored about most of all is often we real-time talk about writing, and you let me help from my own knowledge of writing styles. And I’m always grateful for your thoughts & support.
Jadey x
What I’m honored about most of all is often we real-time talk about writing, and you let me help from my own knowledge of writing styles. And I’m always grateful for your thoughts & support.
Jadey x
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Re. Practiced Ways
3rd Aug 2018 2:43am
sometimes going away from the well trodden path inspires one, at times it is like a new beginning to something. Ah yes, but here we stay yet, until the path peters off to nothingness. Inspiring write, Crowfly.
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Re: Re. Practiced Ways
4th Aug 2018 1:24am
Deciding which path to take is the trick. Can't seem to make up my mind most of the time. I go down too many dark roads. Thanks Grace!
Re. Practiced Ways
5th Aug 2018 1:36am
I care little if any for established styles ,
and the only time I syllable count is Haiku ;
All the rest I disavow and feels kills the spirit of true poetry ;
This is why I hate other's critique , because they are not my
Muse , and have no idea of what is right for me...
Some say : "Only The Shadow Knows"
I say "Only My Muse Knows" , all else are but demon voices in a desert wind !
Listen to your Muse , build altars , call on him / her at midnight , in the dawn ,
the dusk , at noon in the blazing day , Invoke , Invoke , Invoke !
And you shall find that inner voice you seek , but be careful ;
Once she comes , she will never leave , unless you spurn her !
My advice ?
Never , ever , spurn her !
Her wrath is an endless hell !
and the only time I syllable count is Haiku ;
All the rest I disavow and feels kills the spirit of true poetry ;
This is why I hate other's critique , because they are not my
Muse , and have no idea of what is right for me...
Some say : "Only The Shadow Knows"
I say "Only My Muse Knows" , all else are but demon voices in a desert wind !
Listen to your Muse , build altars , call on him / her at midnight , in the dawn ,
the dusk , at noon in the blazing day , Invoke , Invoke , Invoke !
And you shall find that inner voice you seek , but be careful ;
Once she comes , she will never leave , unless you spurn her !
My advice ?
Never , ever , spurn her !
Her wrath is an endless hell !
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Re. Practiced Ways
6th Aug 2018 6:52pm
I just started doing the syllable count and find it inhibiting. I can be fun though, as long as it doesn't get in the way. Thank you!