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Bottled Up
No more whining about pain
Learning to just take the strain
A tad less smoke, of course the booze
Numb skull or lucid, mine to choose
The opiates lose potency
For a man not prone to decency
Who takes a pull of cheaper wine
Dying slowly on his vine
Some fool says to take the cure
Live my life, remaining pure
I'm still inclined to hesitate
And swill more as the hour grows late
I will recover, that I swear
I'm not quite beyond repair
Drop the bottle, watch it break
Seems there's just too much at stake.
Learning to just take the strain
A tad less smoke, of course the booze
Numb skull or lucid, mine to choose
The opiates lose potency
For a man not prone to decency
Who takes a pull of cheaper wine
Dying slowly on his vine
Some fool says to take the cure
Live my life, remaining pure
I'm still inclined to hesitate
And swill more as the hour grows late
I will recover, that I swear
I'm not quite beyond repair
Drop the bottle, watch it break
Seems there's just too much at stake.
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15th Jul 2018 9:31pm
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15th Jul 2018 9:38pm
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15th Jul 2018 9:49pm
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15th Jul 2018 9:42pm
Reading this with brandy in hand, late Sunday afternoon, gives me pause...
Wonderful Write!
Wonderful Write!
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17th Jul 2018 1:36am
Re. Bottled Up
16th Jul 2018 1:36am
Been there, done that... and learnt my lesson from a very young age.
Life, is no fairy tale.
Knowing your triggers, and implementing other strategies is key to breaking the habit of self medicating.
I know, easier said than done but it’s worth exploring.
And.
Peace be unto you... if you’re navigating your way through this kind of thing ! 🌹🌻🌺
Life, is no fairy tale.
Knowing your triggers, and implementing other strategies is key to breaking the habit of self medicating.
I know, easier said than done but it’s worth exploring.
And.
Peace be unto you... if you’re navigating your way through this kind of thing ! 🌹🌻🌺
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17th Jul 2018 1:37am
I'm trying to get a grip. I have all kinds of excuses for drinking, none of them valid. Thanks Shadow!
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16th Jul 2018 3:23am
Hi Crow, it’s good to see you are staying strong .
Keep writing ✍️ ❤️👍
Loves you
Jackie 🐾😁
Keep writing ✍️ ❤️👍
Loves you
Jackie 🐾😁
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17th Jul 2018 1:38am
Re. Bottled Up
16th Jul 2018 3:57am
I feel you dearest Sir Crow
it's like not breathing
or holding your breath forever
is trying to be sober it seems...
excellent write...
love Crim
it's like not breathing
or holding your breath forever
is trying to be sober it seems...
excellent write...
love Crim
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17th Jul 2018 1:40am
Like holding your breath forever, indeed. Couldn't agree more. Thank you Lady Crim.
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Anonymous
16th Jul 2018 4:23am
Hey Crow....... sry thought provoking ink......I sometimes think my heart is a bottle.......filled with purple tears of life’s lessons....some good some bad......really enjoyed this,,,,.has made me think for sure.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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17th Jul 2018 1:41am
Your heart a bottle filled with love. Better that than tequila. Thank you Flower!
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Bravo Sir Crow! The duplicity of thoughts and desires illustrate very well the plight if the addicted. This passage I feel is a perfect play on words:"Who takes a pull of cheaper wine
Dying slowly on his vine"
Dying slowly on his vine"
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17th Jul 2018 1:42am
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17th Jul 2018 1:52am
Me too! Not with drugs or alcohol but with food. We can come off conquers for sure.
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17th Jul 2018 4:18am
I love the occasional mojito once upon a time:) lovely. But due to health reasons Im strictly water now. Sad. Imbibe in moderation is a good advice. Good read Crowfly.
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17th Jul 2018 2:38pm