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cotton candy
your Goddess stirs from her slumber
I feel my candied hole wettening
creamy with the thoughts you conjure
feel me as I enter
pure energy for you to plunder
during acts of depravity two become one
as pink pleaser becomes swollen from your attentions
lick, bite and taste my sweet confection
cotton candy pussy
dissolving on your tongue
legs opened and fully splayed
an invitation for you to fuck me
taste my soul as you enter roughly
I've been withholding from you
I feel your deep ache
inside my darkness greed
feed the beast who loves to be mean
"yes you, thug hard I know you"
bend me to your will
with a smack on my ass
order me to bend over don't ask
in this dimension and the next
Dominance rules in the sex zone
piss on me baby or get pissed on
my tight little ass just begging for a fucking
taunts you "now pound me"
in and out, quick and rough
wrap your hand in my mane
tell me giddy-up
ride um cowboy this is your rodeo
show this cowgirl how you work the rim
with a hiss and a quick intake of breath
I cry out in pain
as you destroy my hole for any other
cause yeah daddy I know you're packing
unload in my greedy want
then watch as I blow cum bubbles for you
it's your birthday let's celebrate
with cum all over my face
your Goddess is now fucked and owned
by thug hard rider from the nether realm
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18th Jun 2018 8:44pm
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18th Jun 2018 10:01pm
I love the raw energy of this lust filled work...brilliant use of language...you've probably stirred up many more than just me...love it Brenda, feed on the psychic feedback rushing into you and enjoy...
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19th Jun 2018 6:01am
thank you graciously dearest Lawrence I'm basking in the beautiful energy :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
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Anonymous
18th Jun 2018 11:11pm
Brenda.. lusciously written.. into the list it goes.. i've got a sudden urge for cotton candy.. love you..
Dave
Dave
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19th Jun 2018 5:28pm
thank you graciously John that's a fantastic response ;)
I look forward to your visits..
love Crim
I look forward to your visits..
love Crim
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Anonymous
19th Jun 2018 7:57pm
Oh wow....definitely one of my favourite reads.....EVER! 🤗
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19th Jun 2018 7:59pm
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Anonymous
19th Jun 2018 8:17pm
You are great.....pure inspiration, Crimsen!
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20th Jun 2018 8:37pm
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Anonymous
20th Jun 2018 4:16am
My love, the naughty little you here leaves me a squirming mess as I see you within each captivating and titillatingly lust filled line...yummy indeed!
I love you wildly!
Xoxo with all my love Taryn
I love you wildly!
Xoxo with all my love Taryn
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20th Jun 2018 8:38pm
giggles thank you my love for feeling the vibe here i'm so happy you found pleasure in it..
I love you..
love Brenda
I love you..
love Brenda
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I love your poetic seduction and the taste of Cotton Candy dissolving in my mouth.
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29th Jun 2018 7:13pm
thank you dearest Shakespearan i'm always in the moment when I write these.. aching and ready to let the flood cum.. I'm glad it comes across in my writes..
love Crim
love Crim