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little deaths of a poet
we die within our creation
little pieces of our soul is given
so that each poem
may be gifted
with the song of the living
it is our sacred debt to the universe
to be bearers of light in this world
it is of the giver's free will
to lose themselves to their art
sit back and watch it
like a mama hen
nervous over her hatchling
while it takes its first steps
some are shaky
others take off running
it calls to the peoples
within it's song so secret
only those set on this journey
will ever hear it
passing the cup of wisdom
one to another
we drink this knowledge
knowing it's hallowed
getting drunk off its spirit
we lie with our muse
and make love to it
behold a new thought is born
blinking in wonder at the Earth
innocent yet unafraid
because it carries bits of us
little bits of soul
we do this in sacred trust
poets of the order
take your place of honor
and sing for all your worth
while the world quietly listens
dissecting the hidden wisdom
you've been given
by design and instruction
woven inside your artistry
a feeling inside a poem
connecting you with all that's living
then take breath and exhale
while a new idea is forming
and the cycle of life completed
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Re. little deaths of a poet
4th Jun 2018 1:02pm
So much truth here ... where to begin ... inspiring write my poetess ...
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Re: Re. little deaths of a poet
4th Jun 2018 1:04pm
aw thank you beautiful Dragonfly i'm deeply honored by your lovely thoughts and add :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re: Re. little deaths of a poet
4th Jun 2018 1:07pm
Re: Re. little deaths of a poet
4th Jun 2018 1:10pm
aw beautiful i'm blushing wildly
you are very uniquely gifted
not another like you..
love you lovely..
love Brenda
you are very uniquely gifted
not another like you..
love you lovely..
love Brenda
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Re: Re. little deaths of a poet
4th Jun 2018 1:34pm
thank you dearest John for seeing the truth in what was revealed to me about our sacred connection..
love Crim
love Crim
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Re: Re. little deaths of a poet
4th Jun 2018 2:31pm
Re. little deaths of a poet
Anonymous
4th Jun 2018 3:32pm
I do believe, my beautiful Dark Angel, that there are not only little deaths in this poem, but little births...the cycle of life. We birth thoughts and emotions to share with others and with each connection another thread is woven into the web. Beautiful poetry, gorgeous. I love you
...ever your Willow
...ever your Willow
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Re: Re. little deaths of a poet
5th Jun 2018 1:40am
thank you beautiful Willow for embracing this write and what it represents as it is all of us we are all connected taking part in this life giving sacred bond..
I cherish your insight..
I love you..
love Brenda
I cherish your insight..
I love you..
love Brenda
Re. little deaths of a poet
4th Jun 2018 4:30pm
on an on and on and on, listening to the Muses' song....the songs you sing are well worth listening too Brenda...
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Re: Re. little deaths of a poet
5th Jun 2018 2:31am
thank you dearest Lawrence you know I am just a gifted channel as we all of us are..
I cherish what you share with me..
love Brenda
I cherish what you share with me..
love Brenda
Re. little deaths of a poet
Anonymous
4th Jun 2018 4:31pm
My love, how perfectly described...our lives put it there for all to witness - stirring new thoughts and emotions for others as well as each other...life cycle indeed...your mind is most majestic and an experience always honored to be part of...I love this ink, beautiful...
I love you passionately
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
I love you passionately
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
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Re: Re. little deaths of a poet
5th Jun 2018 2:33am
thank you my love it has been revealed to me we us poets are as one on this journey of revelation and enlightenment separate but evolving with one another.. such a gift it is..
I love you so grateful you are my beloved..
love Brenda
I love you so grateful you are my beloved..
love Brenda
Re. little deaths of a poet
Anonymous
4th Jun 2018 7:47pm
Truly you speak the words of a mystical prophet here my sweet lady :
"poets of the order
take your place of honor
and sing for all your worth
while the world quietly listens
dissecting the hidden wisdom
you've been given
by design and instruction
woven inside your artistry
a feeling inside a poem
connecting you with all that's living
then take breath and exhale
while a new idea is forming
and the cycle of life completed".
Returning to a thought I had expressed earlier elsewhere, as you may remember, of the communion of the chosen to bare the weight of message that is given on to them, becoming them and that is so much them to shed pieces of soul, dying a bit each time, as you say. I read this only now and again I am in awe. Thinking how we are all lost, wandering souls that are reflection of the same mirror. Beautiful words and truly felt. Love J
"poets of the order
take your place of honor
and sing for all your worth
while the world quietly listens
dissecting the hidden wisdom
you've been given
by design and instruction
woven inside your artistry
a feeling inside a poem
connecting you with all that's living
then take breath and exhale
while a new idea is forming
and the cycle of life completed".
Returning to a thought I had expressed earlier elsewhere, as you may remember, of the communion of the chosen to bare the weight of message that is given on to them, becoming them and that is so much them to shed pieces of soul, dying a bit each time, as you say. I read this only now and again I am in awe. Thinking how we are all lost, wandering souls that are reflection of the same mirror. Beautiful words and truly felt. Love J
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Re: Re. little deaths of a poet
5th Jun 2018 2:36am
aw thank you dearest Juvenalis I am highly honored by your comment and for the great gift of being the bringer of this message.. I just write as I am bidden.. we do for that gift give pieces of ourselves to be open to hear and then in faith bring it to light..
I love your insight and deep thoughts..
they are a gift to me..
love Crim
I love your insight and deep thoughts..
they are a gift to me..
love Crim
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Anonymous
5th Jun 2018 5:12pm
Thank you. I am honoured. Xx
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Re. little deaths of a poet
6th Jun 2018 10:10pm
You're one poet who bravely puts her heart and soul into her work, then lets it fly. Or soar, as it so often does. You nurture it and it thrives. Superb work, Lady Crim.
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Re: Re. little deaths of a poet
9th Jun 2018 5:08am
thank you dearest Sir Crow i'm deeply moved by your comment.. you are dear to me..
love Crim
love Crim
Re. little deaths of a poet
6th Jun 2018 11:26pm
This really made me smile. You've taken me on a tour of emotions today and I thank you from the bottom of my awakened heart.
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Re: Re. little deaths of a poet
9th Jun 2018 5:09am
thank you dearest Christian for taking this journey with me and gifting me the warmest smiles :)
love Brenda
love Brenda