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GreenMeat SoulFire Dada's Drag
porkloin dada
saxerfon[e] t o n e, r i
g id
in the mark
e t p lace
of some fun'ding fodder's
bag of drippy(trippy!) cream'jean dream[s]
dada / all sticky'like too / dada
T'would be a jolly fckn shame if'n wee would drop
thee circum stance, lose the context,
fumble our nuts, & crack our bolts.
(goodGod does not give extra points for
such lowdown indiscretions)
Ye
better watch what you Eat, for Fat never sleeps.
Ye
better get a line on which topics tend to whistle & tweet
Ye
better Eat what yer watching......(It's all turned green meat!)
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2018dkzkPoomery+HighArtBadPhotographyForRent
Published 10th May 2018
Author's Note
About my inspiration lies a hole.
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10th May 2018 3:30pm
Hahaha...."fumble your nuts & crack your bolts"
some of your word games are fabulous, even though I get slightly confused by your writing at times. I recon that might be your intend.
some of your word games are fabulous, even though I get slightly confused by your writing at times. I recon that might be your intend.
10th May 2018 4:07pm
"slightly confused" is, uh, 'good', since i'm always writing in a more than slightly confused state. Spontaneous belchings from the subConscious. I don't care what it 'means'. 'Meaning' will take care of itself. And pleas don't tell me if you find 'it' out.
I treasure your kind attention, dear.
I treasure your kind attention, dear.
10th May 2018 7:52pm
10th May 2018 8:45pm
10th May 2018 11:12pm
It's a mind twister of befuddlement yet so clear, Danny. As your poetry always is.
Your writing is akin to abstract expressionism, which was typically despised by realists.
I always preferred the former layers in painting. . .they allowed the mind to travel, as does your poetry.
Your writing is akin to abstract expressionism, which was typically despised by realists.
I always preferred the former layers in painting. . .they allowed the mind to travel, as does your poetry.
10th May 2018 11:27pm
that's what it's about, dearest.
the realists can be as real as they wanna make-believe to be.
Reality ain't real to whatever-is-left of "me"
Bless you,beautiful!
the realists can be as real as they wanna make-believe to be.
Reality ain't real to whatever-is-left of "me"
Bless you,beautiful!
11th May 2018 00:57am
11th May 2018 8:38pm
