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Quench Me
Is it the raining season there baby
I doubt it cause you told me
it had been raining for days
Are trees and flowers cheering yet
Oh my love
Have you ever heard of the blue moon cry
My acres of land is cracking dry
Something doesn’t seem all right
Quench me with your wise words
which are really hardcore
Use them to decode the historical code
and open my eyes to the world
Your insight is just full and cool
lead me through the stygian cold
and get to the riches of my goal
Quench me with your steady gaze
with it to cease my burning glaze
My heart is longing for your glance
My desire for your love never ends
I can see behind your eyes
the determined belief
the mountainous faith
and I believe
you’ll always put me up with your hands
Quench me with your loving caress
when it comes to a romance
I’m nothing but a baby in your arms
You’re nothing but a lover with great charms
Even though we are far apart
our spirits meet as a lovely art
Oh my love
Do nothing but just such a sweetheart
The drought of my mind
keep me restless all night
I’m eager for your falling raindrops
for that to quench my thirsty crops
Let them grow to reach our hopes
I doubt it cause you told me
it had been raining for days
Are trees and flowers cheering yet
Oh my love
Have you ever heard of the blue moon cry
My acres of land is cracking dry
Something doesn’t seem all right
Quench me with your wise words
which are really hardcore
Use them to decode the historical code
and open my eyes to the world
Your insight is just full and cool
lead me through the stygian cold
and get to the riches of my goal
Quench me with your steady gaze
with it to cease my burning glaze
My heart is longing for your glance
My desire for your love never ends
I can see behind your eyes
the determined belief
the mountainous faith
and I believe
you’ll always put me up with your hands
Quench me with your loving caress
when it comes to a romance
I’m nothing but a baby in your arms
You’re nothing but a lover with great charms
Even though we are far apart
our spirits meet as a lovely art
Oh my love
Do nothing but just such a sweetheart
The drought of my mind
keep me restless all night
I’m eager for your falling raindrops
for that to quench my thirsty crops
Let them grow to reach our hopes
Author's Note
For my love....
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Re. Quench Me
8th May 2018 3:38am
Something doesn’t seem all right<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>......
god is busy
he speaks
DIRECTLY
YOU in directly
what can god do
he only can hint
and then expect of you
a splint
what u want him to do
shy is he he can't ask you
woooooo hoooooooo
god is busy
he speaks
DIRECTLY
YOU in directly
what can god do
he only can hint
and then expect of you
a splint
what u want him to do
shy is he he can't ask you
woooooo hoooooooo
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Re. Quench Me
8th May 2018 3:42am
I’m eager for your falling.....!!!!!!!00000000 raindrops
speak openly
God knows PLAIN English
but not metaphorically
what u want POET lady
ask God clearly
he wants from u
directly
speak openly
God knows PLAIN English
but not metaphorically
what u want POET lady
ask God clearly
he wants from u
directly
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Re: Re. Quench Me
8th May 2018 3:52am
Dear Again, I need all the love of Him or him....and less busy...
Thank you so much for the concern and I appreciate your support.
love
Jasmine
Thank you so much for the concern and I appreciate your support.
love
Jasmine
Re: Re. Quench Me
8th May 2018 3:59am
u must compose more and quickies youth passes by when none can say it was there here just yesterday where has it gone now just today compose ten every day so many times again did say life is tooooo short anyway your wish write at a speed you may let HIM or him decide for you who am I and who you
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Re: Re. Quench Me
8th May 2018 3:17pm
Re: Re. Quench Me
Thank you Lawrence for the read and commenting. Moving is a great word for this one...
love
Jasmine
love
Jasmine
Re. Quench Me
8th May 2018 6:47am
Rosejasmine, this is a beautifully composed wonderfully romantic piece. You introduced me to 'stygian' a word I'd never met and a place I'd rather not go. I adore this passage:
"Even though we are far apart
our spirits meet as a lovely art "
Bravisima! 美丽的诗人
"Even though we are far apart
our spirits meet as a lovely art "
Bravisima! 美丽的诗人
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Re: Re. Quench Me
8th May 2018 3:44pm
Hey Gahddess, so glad you liked this piece. Your words always touch my heart.
I wouldn't love to visit "stygian" either. It would be extremely dark....
Thank you so much for the RL add.
love
Jasmine
I wouldn't love to visit "stygian" either. It would be extremely dark....
Thank you so much for the RL add.
love
Jasmine
Re. Quench Me
8th May 2018 3:47pm
Re: Re. Quench Me
8th May 2018 3:53pm
Thank you so much my dear DragonFly. Appreciate your always support.
love
Jasmine
love
Jasmine
Re. Quench Me
9th May 2018 4:05pm
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9th May 2018 4:11pm
Re. Quench Me
9th May 2018 10:54pm
That is flowing with tender love and admiration. Enjoyed it.
Daniel
Daniel
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Re: Re. Quench Me
10th May 2018 2:12am
Thank you dear Daniel for the read and commenting. Your words means a lot to me.
love
Jasmine
love
Jasmine
Re. Quench Me
Anonymous
23rd May 2018 1:11pm
Such a desire deserves to be quenched, beautiful words RJ
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Re: Re. Quench Me
23rd May 2018 3:38pm
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Re: Re. Quench Me
23rd May 2018 6:55pm
Thank you Danny for the kind words and RL addition. Appreciate your always support!
love
Jasmine
love
Jasmine
Re. Quench Me
18th Oct 2018 6:07am
Beautifully placed metaphors..! :)
i sensed a "thirsty pen" at work here.
i sensed a "thirsty pen" at work here.
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