On separation

dearest Eamonn you always hit me with your profound insight
with so few words..

I could easily apply this write to my own life..

bloody real and an eye opener..

love Brenda

Hullo, lady

sorry you can relate.  I thought the few words were aptly indicative. poem within a poem type thing

anyhow, much thanks for your presence and thoughts

*hat tip*

Some us are often ahead of everyone else and so we get there faster than the rest.

Hullo, Lena

you could be on to something there. thought maybe there was a sizable time difference b'tween  head and heart 😎

thankee much for dropping by and leaving your thoughts

Wonderful write . Succinct in its relevance and immersion .

Hullo, good fellow

and thanks lots for stopping by and leaving your thoughts

when words are felt in a streak of sync that draws one to that crucial point and patch or a continuum where those emotions had struck deep in a chaotic unspokenness of a crisis ..than all the lucidly blandly running verses..it is where i feel the intensity. U the adored masterpoet is capable of this inexplicably nuanced artistic assault repeatedly n frever..watever said would be lesser ..just immerse in the beauty of ur verses that evoke such intensities such simplistically that's not easy...  
to say of the verses here..could sync it with those voices heard within that tell change is a myth..this adamantine heartsoul is a diamond on the continued paincuts n maturing shines  from watever adverse dimensions passed thru..as if it rares n breathes in such bledness..your last two verses voluminously brings in an expanse of experience gone through..such voice of a braveheart subject! come wat may it proclaims in its nonshowy silence..#juzme dear poet from ur art that is ev adored..culdnt n wuldnt offer any constructive thing fr i feel i keep learning grasping more nuances from ur scribes..  
 
Write on Shine on xx:)

Uma, hullo lady

reading your thoughts it occured to me again that you think and speak poetry. you need only put words on a page and they ooze it.

came close to adding a couple more verses last night, but fortunately I couldn't spell ...or see properly, in fairness

many thanks to you, Lady

Ha!

loving you for this one dear,

and as always .. i do enjoy
when you decide to share
such messages and wisdom

though read in the shadows,
a poet/thinker like yourself
is appreciated

Hullo, good to see you about the place

I love when you love me, Lady 😎  and am honored to be read in the shadows

muchly thanks, Lady

as always dear..

Always impressive how your ink runs so deep in so few words, Eamonn .  A true bard plying his craft !

Hullo

we do what we do, m'man. happy it gave you cause to pause and leave your thoughts

The sense of melancholy in this short piece is overwhelming. At first I wasn't sure if the second stanza was necessary, but reading the poem again it absolutely is.

Jack, how re you doing.

Funny how not many people get whelmed. its mostly too much whelm or not enough whelm. my new goal in life is to whelm somebody.     simply.whelm.them


was gonna kill the last two lines. thought about, wasn't sure. figured I'd let them live for a bit

good to see you around, Jack Thomas Heslop

Keep those last two lines or face my whelming wrath, sir!

I loved this...

Hullo and welcome

thank you for dropping by and leaving your thoughts, muchley appreciated

Always a pleasure
to read you ...

Hullo, dear lady

this place is always more when you grace it. welcome backb

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Uh-huh, felt.
Few words are needed ;)

good day to you, Sophie of the longboats. much pleasured by your visit

Yeah, I guess it's just sorta being in the moment. Some people are slow or hung up, confusing the past with the future. Makes you look like you're ahead of your time.
Like it...poignant and short
A.

Hullo, Lady

couple of ways to read it. on the face of it though, you're right of course. can be slow enough myself sometimes.

thanks bunches for your presence and thoughts

dizzy again......you the man wit d'fans (& rightly so)
so......write on


or whatever.

I dont understand it myself. I paid good money to have them all drive'by'd two years ago yet here they still be

*hat tip* appreciate your words, sir  

Wow, nice writing! It's such a small poem, but it's very expressive...impressive.

I am familiar with this stagnance, and beloevye that when we stop growing and become stagnant, we are no longer living!

Hullo and welcome


you know what they say about size. "its all in the numbers" could never quite understand it myself. then it hit me, and it was big

many thanks for your visit and words, good being

Yeah, I remember it being like that.

Hullo

sorry to hear that.  thanks much for saying it, and dropping in

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Many cliches are brought to mind but they all suffer from a lack of succinct, clear brevity.
Nicely penned!

Hullo there, Jazz

honoured to have your presence and thoughts, thanks much

Really like the short ... crispness of this ...

Hullo

thanks bunches for stopping by and leaving your thought-prints

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Hullo and belated welcomes to the underground

"The static of our being can often be a painful reminder that we have not "moved"  <- put very well, lady.  thanks bunches for dropping into my humble catalogue and leaving your footprint. may your time here be filled with good things


*hat tip"  

It’s “separation” tho

thank you


t's "though" though...

One is a spelling error, the other is internet shorthand meant for effect. Here’s a fun game. Type “tho” into Google, then try typing “seperation” into the same search engine. Lemme know what yah find 😘👌

For the record- I spelled “yah” like that on purpose too. It’s y-o-u. Yah dig tho?

good man, can't fault that kind of logic

 you're thanked much. x