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Re. Journey's End
4th Feb 2018 10:59pm
This seems continuing on your previous theme. One has to truly pause and appreciate the brief moments of our life and the great yawning span of this unknown experiment of existence. Haunting and succinct.
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Re: Re. Journey's End
5th Feb 2018 1:39am
I think this poem is relatable, isn't it. I believe everyone will feel like this as they start to journey towards their twilight years. However this poem was actually written for a visual competition here. Thanks dear Daniel for reading me as always.
Re. Journey's End
5th Feb 2018 4:21am
This poems gives me such an interesting feel. Wonderfully written, Grace, as usual.
~anonshadow
~anonshadow
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Re: Re. Journey's End
7th Feb 2018 9:37am
Re. Journey's End
23rd Feb 2018 2:31pm
I find when I’m waiting for for something important to me that pretty much anything else seems at that point, mundane or even meaningless. Enjoyed
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24th Feb 2018 7:57pm
Re. Journey's End
28th Feb 2018 10:20pm
I'm close (or at) my twilight years and I can feel every line of this. Beautifully done!
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Re: Re. Journey's End
1st Mar 2018 00:14am
You are still young until you start to feel old and tired😀thanks for reading Crowfly
Re. Journey's End
18th Mar 2018 4:04am
I get a good wandering sense off of this. Feels like wilderness. I like wilderness.
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Re: Re. Journey's End
22nd Mar 2018 7:09am