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Horrid fantasy
I want your horror
scare me
amaze me
show me
the meaning
of fear.
I need your torture
cut me
destroy me
give me
the pain
I deserve.
Lust and desire
I'll make it
worth while.
Vampyric
submissive
I give <3
scare me
amaze me
show me
the meaning
of fear.
I need your torture
cut me
destroy me
give me
the pain
I deserve.
Lust and desire
I'll make it
worth while.
Vampyric
submissive
I give <3
Published 17th Dec 2009
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17th Dec 2009 6:06pm
This small poem tells me there are far greater depths that you must explore - and more often. We all crave to know about these darkest places.
18th Dec 2009 7:27pm
liked it. especially the usage of synonyms one after another. in this context those words work really well together. three last lines are like cherry on top of a sweet cream cake :)
5th Jan 2010 1:01pm
I love this. There's a real depth of passion going on here. Tortured, mixed up and intense.
12th May 2013 8:13pm
