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Covered in Prose
i would love to endure your touch against my skin while the placidity of your language curl my breath just to consume desire’s head whole.
....and I wish I could taste your history beneath my tongue, relish the level of conciseness in your speech,
only to season my thirst for what you articulate in flawless and absolute ways,
ways that leave me intoxicated and wet, soaked from your pressurized rain.
i’ve craved to clutch my impressions back and slowly let your verses and verbs slide down my throat,
so I could… cling to the perfect couplet.
a superb soliloquy of you…
entrenched in the security of my intellect, ever amorous of your prose....
within me.
You have mastered the art of caressing me cognitively, molesting me mentally, while ego-stroking my emotions....
how do you do that shit?
Rain
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Re. Covered in Prose
30th Dec 2017 4:23pm
verse
free? nope, tangled, engrossed in/by/with affection- deep.
metaphor. some.
expression.
intense.
ink.
free? nope, tangled, engrossed in/by/with affection- deep.
metaphor. some.
expression.
intense.
ink.
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6th Jan 2018 00:31am
Re. Covered in Prose
30th Dec 2017 4:39pm
When two vibrations extended through the distance collide, it's a nebula of Light and newly birthed stars the number of experienced moments together.
Ah, to savor the delicious taste of verse, created in just the manner you Love.
So good to see you back, Tara. I hope you New Year is blessed with much Love and happiness. 🎉❤
Ah, to savor the delicious taste of verse, created in just the manner you Love.
So good to see you back, Tara. I hope you New Year is blessed with much Love and happiness. 🎉❤
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Re: Re. Covered in Prose
6th Jan 2018 00:37am
Ahavati, when you visit me, you bring all types of goodies!😁 Always leaving positivity, soft vibes and caring energy!
Thank you lovely one!⚘
#PoeticLove
Thank you lovely one!⚘
#PoeticLove
Re. Covered in Prose
30th Dec 2017 7:54pm
just dam! how do U do that? so stunning I'm stuttering, I would say more but it'll come out like I'm pootie tang lol, who can stop the Rain, just pleased to be soaked in your shimmering spill, go goddess...
#taraliscious
#taraliscious
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Re: Re. Covered in Prose
6th Jan 2018 00:44am
Lol...Dean! Dean! Dean! You say things that will get a sista in trouble! 😊
I adore you! Thanks for listing her!💋
I adore you! Thanks for listing her!💋
Re. Covered in Prose
30th Dec 2017 8:06pm
well i've got penis envy lol
jokesjokes
tho seriously,
literary sensuality accomplished.
your metaphors are always sublime, rainy lady.
i bow to the prowess of your pen
xo
jokesjokes
tho seriously,
literary sensuality accomplished.
your metaphors are always sublime, rainy lady.
i bow to the prowess of your pen
xo
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Re: Re. Covered in Prose
6th Jan 2018 1:00am
Lmao @ penis envy! You are so damn adorable woman! Thank you so much for just being you! 😘 Appreciate you keeping her! Hugs & kisses!⚘
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Anonymous
30th Dec 2017 10:00pm
Lady Rain.. your pen is sharp with seduction.. i so adore your work.. this goes into my list.. you're truly amazing.. pen salute.. much love, and respect..
Dave
Dave
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Re: Re. Covered in Prose
Dave, your words are so encouraging!
Thank you so much for sprinkling poetic petals on my page! I'm so happy you decided to take her home.😘
#sonnet-smile
Thank you so much for sprinkling poetic petals on my page! I'm so happy you decided to take her home.😘
#sonnet-smile
Re. Covered in Prose
30th Dec 2017 11:59pm
Re: Re. Covered in Prose
6th Jan 2018 1:10am
Beautiful Je, I've missed you lady! 😘 Thank you for passing through and covering me with lyrical love.⚘
Re. Covered in Prose
31st Dec 2017 1:44am
damn beautiful Rain
this is so sexy, sensual & seductive..
mind blowing line..
"You have mastered the art of caressing me cognitively, molesting me mentally, while ego-stroking my emotions."
gorgeous write..
love Brenda
this is so sexy, sensual & seductive..
mind blowing line..
"You have mastered the art of caressing me cognitively, molesting me mentally, while ego-stroking my emotions."
gorgeous write..
love Brenda
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Re: Re. Covered in Prose
6th Jan 2018 5:42am
....no, you're the one that's sexy, sensual and seductive! 😘
It does my heart and ego good when you list my ink! 😊 Thank you, beautiful!
It does my heart and ego good when you list my ink! 😊 Thank you, beautiful!
Re. Covered in Prose
31st Dec 2017 1:53am
No sweetheart, the question is How do you do that shit to US the readers!! U got me all messed up, feeling some kinda way...like mommy hell yea, do dat shit again... lol...for real though...
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Re: Re. Covered in Prose
6th Jan 2018 6:10am
Lol......didnt know I had that type of affect on you, Rich!😉
Thank you so much for the poetic love.💋
Thank you so much for the poetic love.💋
Re. Covered in Prose
Oh! My dearest Tara,
I am in love with your verse
as you spill it so deliciously into my spirit.
I thirst for your flow to rain down on my brain,
wash over my head and caress every nerve ending
connected to my aching skin...
For too long I have been starved of your sensual etchings
on the stone tablets that cover my heart and soul...
Paint on me so I may reflect the beauty of you dazzling words
and they inspire me with musings of my own!
When you make a comeback, you roar like lion!!!
JJ
I am in love with your verse
as you spill it so deliciously into my spirit.
I thirst for your flow to rain down on my brain,
wash over my head and caress every nerve ending
connected to my aching skin...
For too long I have been starved of your sensual etchings
on the stone tablets that cover my heart and soul...
Paint on me so I may reflect the beauty of you dazzling words
and they inspire me with musings of my own!
When you make a comeback, you roar like lion!!!
JJ
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Re: Re. Covered in Prose
6th Jan 2018 6:18am
Jj, I cherish you!
You have always left me comments laced in gold! Beautiful words of admiration that leaves me breathless!
You are such a gem to have! Thank you sweety, and appreciate you keeping her!😘
You have always left me comments laced in gold! Beautiful words of admiration that leaves me breathless!
You are such a gem to have! Thank you sweety, and appreciate you keeping her!😘
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Anonymous
1st Jan 2018 1:59am
Sonsista...he is a lethal suminabitch isn't he...and right here before all of us...you've shown his lethal poetic match...take a bow...this blazes in heat!
xoxo Taryn
xoxo Taryn
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Re: Re. Covered in Prose
6th Jan 2018 6:22am
....aww.....You say the sweetest-kick ass things, Sonsista!😊
Thank you for dropping by bringing good vibes my ways! 😘
Thank you for dropping by bringing good vibes my ways! 😘
Re. Covered in Prose
1st Jan 2018 9:41pm
i’ve craved to clutch my impressions back and slowly let your verses and verbs slide down my throat,
so I could… cling to the perfect couplet.
Stands to the thunderous applause deserving of this so very hot piece.
With deep admiration,
~Wicked
so I could… cling to the perfect couplet.
Stands to the thunderous applause deserving of this so very hot piece.
With deep admiration,
~Wicked
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Re: Re. Covered in Prose
6th Jan 2018 6:25am
Wicked darlin, you hook me everytime I'm in the midst of your words, be it poem or comments.
Thank you for the pen love and for taking her home!😘
Thank you for the pen love and for taking her home!😘
Re. Covered in Prose
3rd Jan 2018 00:57am
Magic, eroticism and lyrical dexterity woven together with an almost nonchalant ease. X
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Re: Re. Covered in Prose
6th Jan 2018 6:28am
What an amazing reply, Tiger!
Thank you!
So excited about our new ink-connection! 😘
Thank you!
So excited about our new ink-connection! 😘
Re. Covered in Prose
3rd Jan 2018 4:57pm
This is beautiful, sensual and lyrical. Such amazing ink here! A great write that flows together from start to finish. It left me in a daze, having me want and beg for more.
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Re: Re. Covered in Prose
6th Jan 2018 6:31am
That was beautiful and so kind of you to say, eswaller! 😘 Thank you very much and I'm over-joyed you listed her!⚘
Re. Covered in Prose
5th Mar 2018 4:08pm
Snap, snap...... Beautifully written and filled with metaphors... Right up my alley..... This was a very loving and sensual piece touched with softness.....
~BSavvy
~BSavvy
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Re. Covered in Prose
2nd Jul 2023 8:09pm
Another poem about poetry couched in erotic terms, gets my RL (especially for the cheeky picture LOL).
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