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Yen
i need the almond drippings
from his regal phallus to anoint my tongue and christen my throat,
so the language of him can be reborn
and live on my lips forever
i want to hear the madness of his fragmented moans
listen as his groans gain momentum,
when he dips his strength inside my swell, baptizing it with the warmest nectar his throb could ever grasp
it’s the yen on my skin that’s got me spent, got me twisted and bent,
to the point I could easily tip over from a singular lick
i crave to ride his harden promise,
slow grinding his massive pride,
downshift my hips into overdrive
so I can feel the full throttle of thick
he’s got me on an enigmatic rush,
waiting recklessly for the slightest touch to expedite the wait,
suspending space and time when
denying a body on fire....
draped in…… Yen
Rain
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Re. Yen
Pure. Unadulterated. Hotness !!!!
All wrapped up in liquid visions of lust
he’s got me on an enigmatic rush,
waiting recklessly for the slightest touch to expedite the wait,
suspending space and time when
denying a body on fire....
draped in…… Yen
Note to self;
Never , ever read Rain’s poems while at work.
~Wicked
All wrapped up in liquid visions of lust
he’s got me on an enigmatic rush,
waiting recklessly for the slightest touch to expedite the wait,
suspending space and time when
denying a body on fire....
draped in…… Yen
Note to self;
Never , ever read Rain’s poems while at work.
~Wicked
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3rd Jan 2018 10:09pm
Re. Yen
3rd Jan 2018 7:56pm
Oh my good god!!! Wwwooowww!!! The verse, the heat, pic!!! Jesus woman SMH lol... yea.... ;)
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Re: Re. Yen
3rd Jan 2018 10:11pm
Rich, I like when my ink gets you warm and bothered. Lol....
Thank you for kidnapping her!😘
Thank you for kidnapping her!😘
Re. Yen
3rd Jan 2018 8:18pm
This, is absolutely gorgeous in all its entirety, from the first word, to the last !
Kudos to you ~ 🦋😎🌹🌞🎈
Kudos to you ~ 🦋😎🌹🌞🎈
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Re: Re. Yen
3rd Jan 2018 10:14pm
Such a lovely thing to say, shadow! I adore you for dropping by with grand energy! ⚘⚘⚘
Re. Yen
Anonymous
3rd Jan 2018 8:37pm
Succulent & so sensuous
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Re: Re. Yen
3rd Jan 2018 10:16pm
Re: Re. Yen
3rd Jan 2018 10:18pm
Pleased you think so, SweetO! :) Thanks for leaving your floral scent in the air!🌹🌹🌹
Re. Yen
4th Jan 2018 1:00am
Tara you've expressed desire in a very direct yet eloquent manner indicative of feminism.
Beautiful poetry.
Beautiful poetry.
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Re: Re. Yen
4th Jan 2018 3:10am
Thank you so much for the lovely comment Ahavati! It means alot coming from a brilliant poet such as you.😊⚘
Re. Yen
4th Jan 2018 4:01am
OH MY! Even my toes are envious!!! What exquisite imagery spilling of the tip of your overflowing paint brush dear Tara...
"i crave to ride his harden promise"
What I wouldn't do to be a flower pollenating in that garden!
JJ
"i crave to ride his harden promise"
What I wouldn't do to be a flower pollenating in that garden!
JJ
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Anonymous
4th Jan 2018 8:54pm
No mistaking this one, Sonsista...a hit then and a hit now and I'm still clenching fists, wishing for just a pinkie full...
xoxo Taryn
xoxo Taryn
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Re. Yen
8th Jan 2018 2:02am
delicioso! I'm holding you responsible if swallow my phone girl lol, got me yenning, go goddess...
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Re. Yen
20th Jan 2018 1:57pm
Oh you naughty girl Tara. I'm an old man and shouldn't be made to feel this way. Exotic, erotic pulse ragingly wonderful.
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Re. Yen
18th Mar 2018 8:51am
Brow wiping, temperature- rising and erogenous zone engulfing master piece. Your use of language and metaphor is spell binding. Tasteful but laden with sexuality and femininity x
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Re. Yen
16th May 2018 11:53pm
so phenomenally heated that speaks to me temptations of sign languages where I would have to give my last confession. finally someone who I can feel humble enough that I am not worthy of praise but to walk on water as you walked
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Re. Yen
18th Aug 2019 10:02pm
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Re. Yen
5th Jan 2020 6:32am
Re. Yen
28th Jan 2022 8:19am
your pen spills such riveting sensuality...this is truly amazing write!
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Yen
4th Mar 2023 6:17pm
Man, after all these years of reading your thoughts and fantasies, there is never a moment I can't stop reading. You are truly mind blowing Rain and I am a huge fan. Always been and always will!
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Re. Yen
2nd Jul 2023 8:12pm
Favourite line and verse:
he dips his strength inside my swell, baptizing it with the warmest nectar his throb could ever grasp
i crave to ride his harden promise,
slow grinding his massive pride,
downshift my hips into overdrive
so I can feel the full throttle of thick
he dips his strength inside my swell, baptizing it with the warmest nectar his throb could ever grasp
i crave to ride his harden promise,
slow grinding his massive pride,
downshift my hips into overdrive
so I can feel the full throttle of thick
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Re. Yen
4th Mar 2024 2:23am
Hi Rain,
I just read some of your poems, and this one tops the list (so far)! The way you describe the actions is brillant! Looking forward to reading more soon!
Thanks!
I just read some of your poems, and this one tops the list (so far)! The way you describe the actions is brillant! Looking forward to reading more soon!
Thanks!
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Re. Yen
19th Aug 2024 5:14pm
Absolutely incredible piece here. Erotic, yet never vulgar. A very clever write.
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