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Once On Board with Li Bai
朝發白帝城
朝辭白帝彩雲間
千里江陵一日還
兩岸猿聲啼不住
輕舟已過萬重山
Zao Fa Baidi Cheng
chao ci Baidi cai yun jian
qian li Jiangling yi ri huan
liang an yuan sheng ti bu zhu
qing zhou yi guo wan chong shan
Bade farewell to my little shy rose bud
sailing with my drifting heart
my dream boat, the skiff swerves
into the three gorges of Yangtze River
in the territory of Baidi City
I met LI Bai, the God of Poetry
He was born an upper-class dandy
goofing around was his hobby
once he skipped his study
and learned street smarts
about persistence from an old lady
the story he passed down
tells us how a thick iron pestle
can be ground into a tiny needle
Where I saw him a drunken poet
as well as a depressed politician
owing to the false accusation
mistaken by the fatuous emperor
as a victim of a court intrigue
suffering from his banishment
then he got amnesty
telling he had been set free
At dawn we set off from Baidi
the cloud surrounding towering city
My skiff came downstream
flying one thousand miles in a dream
passing through ten thousand mountain ranges
accompanied by the non-stop ape screams
Being cheerful going home
he couldn’t help but write a poem
a seven-character quatrain
with only 28 words
It’s the grand finale
the rarest commodity
in Tong Dynasty
even in Chinese poetry history
朝辭白帝彩雲間
千里江陵一日還
兩岸猿聲啼不住
輕舟已過萬重山
Zao Fa Baidi Cheng
chao ci Baidi cai yun jian
qian li Jiangling yi ri huan
liang an yuan sheng ti bu zhu
qing zhou yi guo wan chong shan
Bade farewell to my little shy rose bud
sailing with my drifting heart
my dream boat, the skiff swerves
into the three gorges of Yangtze River
in the territory of Baidi City
I met LI Bai, the God of Poetry
He was born an upper-class dandy
goofing around was his hobby
once he skipped his study
and learned street smarts
about persistence from an old lady
the story he passed down
tells us how a thick iron pestle
can be ground into a tiny needle
Where I saw him a drunken poet
as well as a depressed politician
owing to the false accusation
mistaken by the fatuous emperor
as a victim of a court intrigue
suffering from his banishment
then he got amnesty
telling he had been set free
At dawn we set off from Baidi
the cloud surrounding towering city
My skiff came downstream
flying one thousand miles in a dream
passing through ten thousand mountain ranges
accompanied by the non-stop ape screams
Being cheerful going home
he couldn’t help but write a poem
a seven-character quatrain
with only 28 words
It’s the grand finale
the rarest commodity
in Tong Dynasty
even in Chinese poetry history
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Re. Once On Board with Li Bai
6th Dec 2017 3:10am
love love it....this my new favorite girly
this is great stuff..keep it up....so nice to see you growing love
love always Jeff
this is great stuff..keep it up....so nice to see you growing love
love always Jeff
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Re: Re. Once On Board with Li Bai
6th Dec 2017 3:40am
Thank you dear Jeff. Always love your comment. Your support is special to me.
Big hug, RoseJasmine
Big hug, RoseJasmine
Re. Once On Board with Li Bai
6th Dec 2017 3:45am
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6th Dec 2017 3:59am
Thank you for the nice comment. Appreciate your support. So glad you liked it.
Love, RoseJasmine
Love, RoseJasmine
Re. Once On Board with Li Bai
6th Dec 2017 4:36am
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6th Dec 2017 5:23am
Thank you Lawrence for the read. I always want to share something new. So glad you enjoy reading it.
Love, RoseJasmnie
Love, RoseJasmnie
Re. Once On Board with Li Bai
6th Dec 2017 5:59am
I have to say...
this is quite some stuff you've composed...
"At dawn we set off from Baidi city
the towering site high in the sky
my skiff came downstream
flying one thousand miles in a dream
passing through ten thousand mountain ranges
accompanied by the non-stopping ape screams "
nice nice!
Love
H
this is quite some stuff you've composed...
"At dawn we set off from Baidi city
the towering site high in the sky
my skiff came downstream
flying one thousand miles in a dream
passing through ten thousand mountain ranges
accompanied by the non-stopping ape screams "
nice nice!
Love
H
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Re: Re. Once On Board with Li Bai
6th Dec 2017 10:28am
That is the prose paraphrase of Li Bai's poem. I quite enjoyed translating it with my sense and words. Love your comment very much dear SourMelon. Thank you for the visit.
Love, RoseJasmine
Love, RoseJasmine
Re. Once On Board with Li Bai
Anonymous
6th Dec 2017 8:40am
Absolutely wonderful
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Re: Re. Once On Board with Li Bai
6th Dec 2017 10:27am
Thank you dear Rags for the nice comment. Your read means a lot to me :)
Big hug, RoseJasmine
Big hug, RoseJasmine
Re. Once On Board with Li Bai
6th Dec 2017 11:53am
Re: Re. Once On Board with Li Bai
6th Dec 2017 1:10pm
This is about the period of time in the history. Just loved it so much. Thank you Soledad for the nice comment and support.
Big hug, RoseJasmine
Big hug, RoseJasmine
Re. Once On Board with Li Bai
6th Dec 2017 1:46pm
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6th Dec 2017 1:57pm
Thank you dear Again for the nice feedback. I am honored really.
Love, RoseJasmine
Love, RoseJasmine
Re. Once On Board with Li Bai
6th Dec 2017 9:59pm
Re: Re. Once On Board with Li Bai
7th Dec 2017 3:44am
Dearest David, always happy to read your comment. Appreciate the love and encouragement.
Big hug, RoseJasmine
Big hug, RoseJasmine
Re. Once On Board with Li Bai
Anonymous
7th Dec 2017 00:41am
Loved this beautiful lesson you have gifted us with :)
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Re: Re. Once On Board with Li Bai
7th Dec 2017 3:47am
It's a great lesson for me too :)
Thank you so much for reading and commenting. They mean a lot to me.
Love, RoseJasmine
Thank you so much for reading and commenting. They mean a lot to me.
Love, RoseJasmine
Re. Once On Board with Li Bai
7th Dec 2017 8:11am
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7th Dec 2017 9:19am
It happened 1374 years ago.
Thank you Lucius. It is fun to write those ancient stories. They are in the history and literature books. Glad you think it's beautiful.
Love, RoseJasmnie
Thank you Lucius. It is fun to write those ancient stories. They are in the history and literature books. Glad you think it's beautiful.
Love, RoseJasmnie
Re. Once On Board with Li Bai
12th Dec 2017 10:52am
Never gonna think you will ink something expected, because you're always presenting us with the unexpected...which is a great thing to treat us to...two big thumbs up my sweetness :)
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Re: Re. Once On Board with Li Bai
12th Dec 2017 11:22am
Aw my dearest Ric, you never told me what you expect me to write, so I just write what I want....love this poetic world....I can always be myself....thanks for the two big thumbs up, I think they mean WONDERFUL!!! :)))
Much love RoseJasmine
Much love RoseJasmine
Re. Once On Board with Li Bai
22nd Jan 2018 2:11pm
Very awesome write RoseJasmine
this is strange and delightful in every way
little shy rose bud's
skiffs
gods of poetry
learning street smarts
iron pestels
fatuous emperor
flying one thousand miles in a dream
"accompanied by the non-stop ape screams"- one of my favorite lines in this
the it all sums up with a 28 word poem for the ages
i love it.
well penned.
this is strange and delightful in every way
little shy rose bud's
skiffs
gods of poetry
learning street smarts
iron pestels
fatuous emperor
flying one thousand miles in a dream
"accompanied by the non-stop ape screams"- one of my favorite lines in this
the it all sums up with a 28 word poem for the ages
i love it.
well penned.
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Oh dear Samael, I have to say you're a very hard-working reader cause you have summarized all of it which I wanted to emphasize. Yea, one of the styles of the poems at the time has only 28 words for a poem. The other style has only 20 words. Interesting right?
Thank you for the read and feedback. Never know when you will read my peoms, but it's always nice to have a surprise :))))
My favorite part of your comment is the sentence, "this is strange and delightful in every way". I consider "strange" is a very good word here :))))
much much love
RoseJasmine
Thank you for the read and feedback. Never know when you will read my peoms, but it's always nice to have a surprise :))))
My favorite part of your comment is the sentence, "this is strange and delightful in every way". I consider "strange" is a very good word here :))))
much much love
RoseJasmine
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22nd Jan 2018 4:50pm
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22nd Jan 2018 4:53pm