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Strong Females Haikus 7.0
(i) Grey
Grey but majestic
A matriarchal governance
Elephantastique
(ii) Pride
The lions pride is here
Skilled cunning female hunters
Brings home the bacon
(iii) Blackened
Sex is on offer
Come in to my web parlor
Widowed yet again
(iv) So Much For Praying
He's praying for sex
Whole head removed and devoured
Go Mrs. Mantis
(v) Latest Score
Young cubs are protected
Mother smacks hungry father
Mom one Father nil
(vi) Male Grooming
Bored pea hen sits, sighs
John Travolta, does his thing
Dude looks like a lady
(vii) Sisters
Strong women fight hard
Better get out of the way
Men should show respect
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Re. Strong Females Haikus 7.0
12th Nov 2017 3:37am
bringing home bacon, bitten off head or two, fight to death for my kids. relate to this, ladyrain.
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Re. Strong Females Haikus 7.0
12th Nov 2017 3:38am
Priceless! From head to toe... the poem or the lady? Both :))
A fantastic write sir!!
A fantastic write sir!!
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Re: Re. Strong Females Haikus 7.0
13th Nov 2017 3:09am
definitely both :-)))))))
thank you my friend :-))))))
Hugest of Hugs :-))))
thank you my friend :-))))))
Hugest of Hugs :-))))
Re. Strong Females Haikus 7.0
Anonymous
12th Nov 2017 3:40am
Nobody bites like mama bear, I think. We have so much to fight for. And a steeper hill to climb. Loving these strong female haikus! Happy huge hugs. 😊
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13th Nov 2017 3:10am
It's time for women to take their place, men won't just give it up, sadly :-((
Huge Hugssssssss :-)))))
Huge Hugssssssss :-)))))
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12th Nov 2017 3:52am
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13th Nov 2017 6:19am
Re. Strong Females Haikus 7.0
Anonymous
12th Nov 2017 10:13am
Nailed it !
Bear Hugs !
Bear Hugs !
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13th Nov 2017 3:12am
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12th Nov 2017 3:30pm
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Re. Strong Females Haikus 7.0
Anonymous
13th Nov 2017 1:27am
(iii) Blackened
Sex is on offer
Come in to my web parlor
Widowed yet again
;-);-);-);-);-);-);-);-);-)
I am a widow. It sucks . This is an incredible Haiku. Probably because it about the power of a 💃
Sex is on offer
Come in to my web parlor
Widowed yet again
;-);-);-);-);-);-);-);-);-)
I am a widow. It sucks . This is an incredible Haiku. Probably because it about the power of a 💃
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13th Nov 2017 3:14am
Re. Strong Females Haikus 7.0
13th Nov 2017 3:47pm
Among the animals and insects/ (arachnids), the fierce strength of the females has been recognized as a force that deserves respect...(even to the point of some deadly consequences--LOL!) couldn't help smiling when i read about the praying mantis. That pathetic male was in way over his head.....( sorry--couldn't help it! Hee! Hee! ) :P
But now....it's definitely time to realize that women are strong! We have the Power! And David with your remarkable humor--as always--these pieces pay tribute to this strength!
Sl`ainte, mo Chara!
(And extra strong, tight hugs!!!)
But now....it's definitely time to realize that women are strong! We have the Power! And David with your remarkable humor--as always--these pieces pay tribute to this strength!
Sl`ainte, mo Chara!
(And extra strong, tight hugs!!!)
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Re: Re. Strong Females Haikus 7.0
15th Nov 2017 7:11pm
I am glad that you got them and the progression of these haikus :-)
where there is no respect there is no love :-(
Huge Hugs :-)
where there is no respect there is no love :-(
Huge Hugs :-)
Re. Strong Females Haikus 7.0
13th Nov 2017 7:21pm
dearest David this is so damned clever
it does seem the ladies have the upper hand
especially in nature..
well said..
classy write..
love & hugs..
Brenda
it does seem the ladies have the upper hand
especially in nature..
well said..
classy write..
love & hugs..
Brenda
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Re: Re. Strong Females Haikus 7.0
15th Nov 2017 7:17pm
Hey - I just say what I see, respect and equality of the genders is vital to human harmony - unfortunately a lot of males still don't get it :-((
thank you - Big Huge hugs :-)))))
thank you - Big Huge hugs :-)))))
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Re: Re. Strong Females Haikus 7.0
15th Nov 2017 7:18pm
thank you so much - I love it when a poet of your high standards likes what I have done :-))))))
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Re: Re. Strong Females Haikus 7.0
15th Nov 2017 7:41pm
I never blow smoke, you know where - If I didn't believe what i said I wouldn't say it - I have read most of your poetry and it is of a very high standard. You have an extensive vocabulary
and you know how to use it - the evidence is here in your poems :-))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
and you know how to use it - the evidence is here in your poems :-))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
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15th Nov 2017 8:00pm
I was and am exactly like you in that respect - publishing can feel like a pipe dream - but them you can self publish on the net, say through someone like Lulu.com - you should think about this, your poetry is seriously good enough :-)))
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