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Walk into the blue
God it feels like I'm being torn apart
I gotta make a decision that's kinda hard
To Stay or go
Soon or now
I gotta break free
I gotta be me
You'll find another toy
And forget about me
I'm to wild and you can never tame me
I'm a free spirit that loves to roam and dream
A nomad with the world at his feet
My dreams treat me with new adventures to see
Unknown of the choices I'll choose
I'll walk out unknowing into the blue .
I gotta make a decision that's kinda hard
To Stay or go
Soon or now
I gotta break free
I gotta be me
You'll find another toy
And forget about me
I'm to wild and you can never tame me
I'm a free spirit that loves to roam and dream
A nomad with the world at his feet
My dreams treat me with new adventures to see
Unknown of the choices I'll choose
I'll walk out unknowing into the blue .
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Re. Walk into the blue
12th Nov 2017 1:19am
I really relate to this. It appears as if I can't do anything right either in my life. Great piece.
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Re: Re. Walk into the blue
12th Nov 2017 2:06am
Re. Walk into the blue
12th Nov 2017 2:09am
Re: Re. Walk into the blue
12th Nov 2017 7:08am
Ah well that's fairly complex to answer in the comments , I could go on and on lol
Re: Re. Walk into the blue
12th Nov 2017 7:34am
Re: Re. Walk into the blue
12th Nov 2017 8:08am
I feel more like common sense ,and respect are issues , she kneels just fine tho and at perfect height as well
Re: Re. Walk into the blue
16th Dec 2017 12:26pm
I think your trying to refer to the 5 live languages by Dr. Chapman. Its an interesting book if you get past the outdated talk.
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Re: Re. Walk into the blue
16th Dec 2017 12:28pm
Kneeling at the perfect height.... Made me laugh. I feel like a bitch now, but I couldn't help myself. Its my kind of humor.
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16th Dec 2017 4:02pm
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Re. Walk into the blue
13th Nov 2017 6:22pm
the world is yours Cosmo One
& who knows what awaits..
great freedom in this write..
love Crim
& who knows what awaits..
great freedom in this write..
love Crim
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Re: Re. Walk into the blue
13th Nov 2017 6:40pm
Re. Walk into the blue
17th Dec 2017 10:14pm
Listen... being a bitch it a perfected art
It takes practice,
Years of being stepped on to become the machine
You can be
Wear it with pride, you’ve survived
It takes practice,
Years of being stepped on to become the machine
You can be
Wear it with pride, you’ve survived
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