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I tip moreover
spill from the top of the sill
releasing the odor
the beast's war motor
my feast precedes the whore's
but she wants to eat even more
responds with heat in hand recently scored
now we are equal so let me see that cure
she got constricted pupils,
says she's positive
while she slobbering
so it is obviously pure
I put trouble in motion
double rails out in the open
it couldn't have failed
but, this dose..
left veins frozen
as it lay me down broken
spill from the top of the sill
releasing the odor
the beast's war motor
my feast precedes the whore's
but she wants to eat even more
responds with heat in hand recently scored
now we are equal so let me see that cure
she got constricted pupils,
says she's positive
while she slobbering
so it is obviously pure
I put trouble in motion
double rails out in the open
it couldn't have failed
but, this dose..
left veins frozen
as it lay me down broken
Published 27th Oct 2017
| Edited 28th Oct 2017
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Anonymous
30th Oct 2017 00:01am
Intense, deep write... glad it's not a recent thing for you <3
30th Oct 2017 00:41am
thank you! I am glad i left this one just written and not recorded even though i had an instrumental i used to write it. I think that this one in particular is best left read.
