Dance

Love the depth of this. Wow.

Thank you!

Wonderful flow as always! Great write :-)

Thanks Starlite :)

Amazing melody throughout! 😊

Thanks AtoMik! :)

interesting juxtaposition between the tangible and the etheral
cool write!

Thanks for the feedback Xhrinic!

"the ebb and flow of celebrations    
or whipping fury of damnations    
all under the same cosmic vibrations    
manifesting answers to circumstances"

beautiful Nightbird what a deep write
whether in celebration or damnation
the same cosmic vibrations affect us
gifting us answers..

wonderful..

love Crim

You see the message here :) Thank you dear crim <3

"manifesting answers to circumstances    
no hesitations with tools in hand    
maneuvering manuscripts of calibration    
we master the derivative of the outcome "

each line
a poem
with depth

expression.

delivery.

job.

:) It was all just alternative perspectives of the formula.

Everything is a dance in mathmatics. . . science unravels something as beautiful as music in intervals of thirds and so on.  

The science of inspiration lies within the space between the music, which holds all things together.  

Your diction and syntax are reflective of AtoMikOnes, yet retain the individual uniqueness that is you .  

Wonderfully done!

Thank you for this wonderful reflective review! Music does stir the soul to dance such frequencies :)

love your mathematical poetry - I really miss dancing and have to settle for bum dancing and dancing in my head - I am beginning to think that those two are just as valid - if the music moves you then dance how you can :-)

Loved it :-) Big Hugs :-)

Well you know eventually we'll all be dancing in our seats, immobile due to one thing or another... but you'll be the best dancer there :) Dance on my friend! *hugs*

I will be the John Travolta of the care home (LOL)

Haha I have no doubt!! :)

Love the rhythm-would be great read out loud.

Lol not the first time I’ve heard that :))) Glad you enjoyed this.

Really enjoyed this.  Not sure what to say that hasn’t already been said in the above comments.

A thoughtful dance indeed

Well thanks for joining in the dance =) Glad you had a good time!

Dance, dance, dance. Take every chance to wander, ponder, wonder, go asunder.  You've got talent!!!

Why thank you kind sir!