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Contemplation
To love literally,
actively engage;
go out of one’s way.
Sacrifice;
how do you judge it?
…you must know
that you don’t know
anything.
Along the way…
learn always.
Be
curious
just to be.
Sit in the dark;
be still.
Can you hear it?
...this Om
will set you free…
Published 14th Oct 2017
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14th Oct 2017 5:04am
Sometimes we need to have some time to really think about absolutely nothing. We fill our lives with so much that it is possible to just overload on things that ultimately do not matter. A little contemplation and an Om or two to center oneself sounds divine.
Thank you for the write.
Thank you for the write.
15th Oct 2017 4:06am
A very wise retort Sunwolfe! Thank you for taking the time for this reflection :)
14th Oct 2017 8:11am
15th Oct 2017 4:03am
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15th Oct 2017 4:07am
14th Oct 2017 7:38pm
another beautiful write, beautifully crafted, really enjoyable - inside my head is like a bucket of frogs - i have tried meditation but my head is constantly busy :-)
excellent ink - like much :-)
excellent ink - like much :-)
15th Oct 2017 4:08am
Thank you my friend :) I love your analogy! I suffer a restless monkey-mind, myself ;)
17th Oct 2017 8:03pm
beautiful Nightbird
what a wonderful gift you hold inside
I am blessed to read this
& say a deep om in honor of your wisdom..
love & hugs Brenda
what a wonderful gift you hold inside
I am blessed to read this
& say a deep om in honor of your wisdom..
love & hugs Brenda
18th Oct 2017 4:11am
17th Feb 2018 4:57pm
Good write nightbirdblue
the questioning of sacrifice
how its judged
defined
applied like a band aid to everyday life
the pursuit
breaking out amidst the odds
i really like how this write ends
"Sit in the dark;
be still.
Can you hear it?
...this Om
will set you free…"
excellent poem
well penned
the questioning of sacrifice
how its judged
defined
applied like a band aid to everyday life
the pursuit
breaking out amidst the odds
i really like how this write ends
"Sit in the dark;
be still.
Can you hear it?
...this Om
will set you free…"
excellent poem
well penned
17th Feb 2018 8:35pm
Thank you for sharing your thoughts samael, I'm so glad you enjoyed it! This is a special write for me and you really got the message here =)
17th Feb 2018 8:39pm
