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One Cut
One cut
One cut speaks what I can't say
One cut heals what can't be healed
One cut fills me with a feeling
One cut drains whatever's building
One cut apologizes a hundred times
One cut forgives it afterwards
One cut teaches me a lesson
One cut holds a better grudge than me
One cut reminds me of my ignorance
One cut distracts me when I need it
One cut never dissapoints me
One cut redifines disappointing
One cut revisits me in the valleys
One cut walks me to the peak
One cut fuels my broken body
One cut will never leave
One cut
One cut speaks what I can't say
One cut heals what can't be healed
One cut fills me with a feeling
One cut drains whatever's building
One cut apologizes a hundred times
One cut forgives it afterwards
One cut teaches me a lesson
One cut holds a better grudge than me
One cut reminds me of my ignorance
One cut distracts me when I need it
One cut never dissapoints me
One cut redifines disappointing
One cut revisits me in the valleys
One cut walks me to the peak
One cut fuels my broken body
One cut will never leave
One cut
Written by
Thetravelingfairy
Published 29th Sep 2017
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Re. One Cut
29th Sep 2017 2:03am
this is deep lovely Fairy
that ending really hammered the pain home
& the idea of finding lasting acceptance from that cut..
fantastic write..
love Crim
that ending really hammered the pain home
& the idea of finding lasting acceptance from that cut..
fantastic write..
love Crim
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Re: Re. One Cut
29th Sep 2017 2:19am
Delighted by your comment Crim! Acceptance comes at a price, a painful one... Thanks for stopping by :)
Re. One Cut
29th Sep 2017 5:14am
"One cut never disappoints me
One cut redefines disappointing"
I felt these lines deeply.
Beautifully expressed!
One cut redefines disappointing"
I felt these lines deeply.
Beautifully expressed!
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Re: Re. One Cut
29th Sep 2017 5:22am
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Re: Re. One Cut
29th Sep 2017 3:21pm
Stillborn, that is a huge compliment! So glad you enjoyed it :) thanks for stopping by
Re. One Cut
29th Sep 2017 12:13pm
I feel like I am witnessing each cut fromwithin the mind of this tortured soul. It is saddening, yet blissful.
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Re: Re. One Cut
29th Sep 2017 3:22pm
My intention was to convey such feeling, so glad they were understood. I appreciate your comment :)
Re. One Cut
29th Sep 2017 8:37pm
Wow... this spoke to me on a deeply personal level. I absolutely loved it! Great write!
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Re: Re. One Cut
30th Sep 2017 7:19pm
Re. One Cut
29th Sep 2017 8:37pm
Wow... this spoke to me on a deeply personal level. I absolutely loved it! Great write!
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Re. One Cut
29th Sep 2017 8:53pm
I hope the final cut will be of your own doing and not because it's depth drowned you...
A very revealing write!
JJ
A very revealing write!
JJ
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Re: Re. One Cut
1st Oct 2017 6:52am
Poetryman, I'm touched by your comment, thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed it, thanks for stopping by
Re. One Cut
Anonymous
29th Sep 2017 11:29pm
Fairy.. love the depth, and soul of this ink.. very well written, as always.. much respect..
Dave
Dave
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Re: Re. One Cut
1st Oct 2017 6:54am
Re. One Cut
1st Oct 2017 3:02am
I love it! It is very deep. My favorite line is "One cut will never leave". I can totally relate to the feeling you portray in this.
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Re: Re. One Cut
1st Oct 2017 6:56am
Thank you! That line is definitely a stand out to me, hauntingly true... So happy you enjoyed it :)