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wildflower days
my storm is quietly building
i can feel it
as lightening strikes
inside my mind
i know the thunder isn't far behind
so powerful
it will make the ground quake
spiritual power
from the cosmos
igniting in me
burn down the past
with sweet incense
i watch it all go
& from the ash i emerge
with lilting poetry on my lips
to charm the deities
entice them with songs
sunflowers blink open their eyes
& raise their faces to me
they sing along
wildflower days
living in the sun's glory
running in the fields of wisdom
the rains come
bringer of life
kissing my soul
i turn & am new again
as i take breath
for the first time
i breathe
& poetry blooms
marking my steps
are the daisies
lighting a new path
the brambles are burnt
the truth will be told
it can't be quieted
spilt from the lips
of a poet lost & found
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Re. wildflower days
28th Sep 2017 5:30pm
Such a beautiful piece of personal growth. This one resonated with me. Thank you.
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28th Sep 2017 5:43pm
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28th Sep 2017 5:58pm
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28th Sep 2017 6:22pm
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Anonymous
- Edited 28th Sep 2017 6:44pm
28th Sep 2017 6:41pm
I am very sporadic on Dup at best at the moment unfortunatly but i still read where i can even if time to comment is a bit sparse of late...which irrirates me to hell but it can't be helped...however.....when i read something like this i have to say something......
I think of all your writes this is my favourite..word choice, imagery, emotions all the blah blahs are there and are wonderfully crafted and literally sung to me.
Straight into my RL as this is a definite keeper 😊 in fact this is one of my favourite poems i've read todate online or published.
"marking my steps
are the daisies
lighting a new path"
Love it
B xxx
I think of all your writes this is my favourite..word choice, imagery, emotions all the blah blahs are there and are wonderfully crafted and literally sung to me.
Straight into my RL as this is a definite keeper 😊 in fact this is one of my favourite poems i've read todate online or published.
"marking my steps
are the daisies
lighting a new path"
Love it
B xxx
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28th Sep 2017 6:43pm
dearest Ben i've been sporadic myself lately & I understand the need to just take a break.. I love it when you're here.. I have to say i'm greatly honored & humbled by your comment you made my week & gifted me many smiles thank you :) love Brenda
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Anonymous
28th Sep 2017 7:05pm
This is so you ! It's a combo of so many of your writes and you are displayed upon the page in this ink.
Loved this Crim
Loved this Crim
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28th Sep 2017 7:11pm
thank you graciously dearest Ragnar for feeling my heartbeat in writes like this :) love Crim
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28th Sep 2017 8:10pm
oh my stars & garters, this is the most glorious awakening brenda.
i adore the progression, the heart-poundingly ominous first stanza to the proverbial break in the clouds
ugh gods, its gorgeous & cleansing & as wonderfully dichotomous as you are
xo
i adore the progression, the heart-poundingly ominous first stanza to the proverbial break in the clouds
ugh gods, its gorgeous & cleansing & as wonderfully dichotomous as you are
xo
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28th Sep 2017 8:14pm
thank you beautiful one you always make me gush from your comments :) I love you.. Brenda
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This is supernal sweet enchantress the ancients carry you
Supernova for me so I may view and bathe in esoteric creation
"Running in the fields of wisdom" how I wish I could stay there
Supernova for me so I may view and bathe in esoteric creation
"Running in the fields of wisdom" how I wish I could stay there
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28th Sep 2017 9:20pm
dearest Quiet One sigh me too my friend if we could but stay in the wisdom fields.. thank you your thoughts are deeply cherished.. love Crim
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Anonymous
29th Sep 2017 2:46am
my love, this is breathtaking in it's visuals...back and forth from storms to sunshine and I can see your beautiful feet walking along a daisy lined path....oh did this bring me smiles...i thank you for that....a poet you are indeed....how I love you
yours always & forever
xoxoxoxoxoxoxox Taryn
yours always & forever
xoxoxoxoxoxoxox Taryn
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29th Sep 2017 6:17am
thank you graciously my love i'm basking in the sunshine of your love at the moment I am both humbled & honored by your thoughts.. I love you madly.. love Brenda
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Anonymous
29th Sep 2017 11:45pm
Brenda.. simply beautiful, and brilliant.. just like you, my lovely sister.. love you..
Dave
Dave
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4th Oct 2017 6:05pm
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30th Sep 2017 7:39pm
such a beautiful poets' battle hymn - simply beautiful and passionate - it really raised my spirits :-)
Big Massive Hugs :-)
Big Massive Hugs :-)
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4th Oct 2017 6:06pm
thank you dearest David it brings a warm smile to my face to have lifted your spirits :) love & hugs Brenda
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Anonymous
2nd Oct 2017 2:38pm
I have, of late, been much within and a bit lost myself. And woke the past two mornings to wild thunderstorms and torrential rains. And with them have begun to feel renewed. This is such a stunning visual journey and I can find comfort and peace in your words here, most beautiful. You should know that where you walk, flowers will always grow. I do so love you, my beautiful Dark Angel
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4th Oct 2017 6:07pm
thank you lovely one yes the storms can wash everything away awakening to a bright new day.. love your thoughts on my flowers :) love you lady.. Crim
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"sunflowers blink open their eyes / & raise their faces to me / they sing along" -- This is my absolutely favorite verse! What a lovely visual of organic animation!
"with lilting poetry on my lips / to charm the deities / entice them with songs" -- Again, you've given a breath of life to this piece in a magical way with this expression!
I could sing this in matra! Pure Zen and transformation relayed through this message crimsin! I feel connected to a sacred nature and empowered through the movement of this write.
Namaste my dear <3
"with lilting poetry on my lips / to charm the deities / entice them with songs" -- Again, you've given a breath of life to this piece in a magical way with this expression!
I could sing this in matra! Pure Zen and transformation relayed through this message crimsin! I feel connected to a sacred nature and empowered through the movement of this write.
Namaste my dear <3
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10th Oct 2017 6:45pm
lovely Nightbird your comment sings to my heart & breathes new life into me on this day :) love Crim
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Re: Re. wildflower days
10th Oct 2017 6:46pm
thank you beautiful Daniella you are so right lovely lady we write it away :) love Brenda
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Re. wildflower days
6th May 2019 5:15pm
I just set you up with a load of themes, crim, hope you don't mind. I'm aiming for the 'Themes' reading challenge award.
I like your descriptions of nature in the way that it inspires your motivation to write.
I like your descriptions of nature in the way that it inspires your motivation to write.
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6th May 2019 5:17pm