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Because You can't, I Will
firmly bed You in my heart;
its pulsing lips
parting your own with want
Because You can't, I will
expertly mount your Soul
with my parted desire
vulnerably exposed
Because you can't, I will
impale my feminine essence
onto your masculine presence;
consummating Our Love
Because You can't, I will
adorn Our threshold with Truth
keep fueled the lantern of Trust
until You find your way Home
Because You can't, I will
for the both of Us
~
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Re. Because You can't, I Will
22nd Aug 2017 4:03pm
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23rd Aug 2017 00:45am
Re. Because You can't, I Will
22nd Aug 2017 4:28pm
beautiful poem describing a strong and loving woman and it's true sometimes you have to sacrifice your self for the sake of us :-)
there is such power in these words :-)
there is such power in these words :-)
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I think as many men sacrifice for us as well, depending on the circumstance. And while I believe Love requires no sacrifice; we can certainly choose to sacrifice to follow it.
Thank you. I always appreciate your comments.
Thank you. I always appreciate your comments.
Re. Because You can't, I Will
22nd Aug 2017 4:48pm
gorgeous
selfless
feminine
strong
pure
love
ugh fucking hell vati, this is just amazing
xo
selfless
feminine
strong
pure
love
ugh fucking hell vati, this is just amazing
xo
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Thank you!
Gracias!
Merci Beaucoup!
Grazie!
Domo Arigato!
do jeh!
Danke sehr!
xo ❤
Gracias!
Merci Beaucoup!
Grazie!
Domo Arigato!
do jeh!
Danke sehr!
xo ❤
Re. Because You can't, I Will
22nd Aug 2017 5:59pm
Re: Re. Because You can't, I Will
23rd Aug 2017 2:10am
Re. Because You can't, I Will
Anonymous
22nd Aug 2017 7:48pm
This surges with sensuality, but more predominantly is overflowing with Love.
The repetition starting with the title stays fresh on down to the final stanza.
"Because You can't, I will
adorn Our threshold with Truth
keep fueled the lantern of Trust
until You find your way Home"
Well, that's just Metaphor Magic right there.
💜
~ walks towards the Light ~
The repetition starting with the title stays fresh on down to the final stanza.
"Because You can't, I will
adorn Our threshold with Truth
keep fueled the lantern of Trust
until You find your way Home"
Well, that's just Metaphor Magic right there.
💜
~ walks towards the Light ~
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"This surges with sensuality, but more predominantly is overflowing with Love."
Thank You. I believe true sensuality to be born from Love. And that all else is forgotten through time. Except for the ingrained experience that 'tis best not to experience at all, than to settle for less again.
In the Movie "One Night with the King", Esther has a beautiful necklace that reflected stars across the room as though light off water. Only she and King Xerxes could see their light.
It was the Truth that saved them both.
Keep walkin' toward the Light, Capt'n. 💜
Thank You. I believe true sensuality to be born from Love. And that all else is forgotten through time. Except for the ingrained experience that 'tis best not to experience at all, than to settle for less again.
In the Movie "One Night with the King", Esther has a beautiful necklace that reflected stars across the room as though light off water. Only she and King Xerxes could see their light.
It was the Truth that saved them both.
Keep walkin' toward the Light, Capt'n. 💜
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Anonymous
23rd Aug 2017 2:39am
I still have yet to to see the movie! XO
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Because You Can't, I Will
go out and look for someone
who can ..
but that's just me, it's
an excellent poem ..
go out and look for someone
who can ..
but that's just me, it's
an excellent poem ..
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23rd Aug 2017 00:54am
Re. Because You can't, I Will
27th Aug 2017 1:23am
i know, darling ahavat,i that i am rather late to the party but i just wanted to tell you how much i love this poem! it rightly vibrates with feminine strength and sensuality and just enough mystery so as to captivate. very fine work, you have really been on your game of late!
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Re: Re. Because You can't, I Will
27th Aug 2017 2:16am
Re. Because You can't, I Will
Anonymous
9th Sep 2017 10:19pm
this is heart stopping beautiful, darling love
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Re. Because You can't, I Will
19th Sep 2017 5:39pm
Beautiful expression of the power of loving someone.
"Because You can't, I will"....such a simple statement but so powerful.
Thanks for the read
"Because You can't, I will"....such a simple statement but so powerful.
Thanks for the read
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20th Sep 2017 1:19pm