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Torchless
It has returned
Grey skies just before the black
Sinister plot to snuff out the sun
Horizon gone
Swallowed by shadows
Darkness sets in
Fostering the long cold night
Whispers of demons
Howling beasts long thought dead
Gnashing teeth, alive and well
How quickly the monsters move
When the light is gone
Grey skies just before the black
Sinister plot to snuff out the sun
Horizon gone
Swallowed by shadows
Darkness sets in
Fostering the long cold night
Whispers of demons
Howling beasts long thought dead
Gnashing teeth, alive and well
How quickly the monsters move
When the light is gone
Published 10th Aug 2017
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Anonymous
10th Aug 2017 9:11pm
I know this landscape. You've described it so well. Remember, where there are shadows there must also be light. Eyes on the light and face those demons down, Zach. Hugs inbound, my friend
10th Aug 2017 9:13pm
10th Aug 2017 11:32pm
dearest Zach
I feel the deep pain & despair of this write
i've been there my friend
in fact I am fighting it now
deep write..
hugs Brenda
I feel the deep pain & despair of this write
i've been there my friend
in fact I am fighting it now
deep write..
hugs Brenda
11th Aug 2017 1:37am
Thank you. I wish you good fortune in your battle crim. May we both emerge to a glorious sunrise.
Anonymous
11th Aug 2017 1:52am
Zach, I am hoping you can emerge...it seems these shadows have many right now...perhaps if My Lovely Luna, My Beautiful Brenda and I light a torch as we fight them as well, you can find your way out...
xoxo Taryn
xoxo Taryn
Thank you. That is quite a lovely thought there Taryn. I have no doubt that I shall see light again. How can I not with such beautiful souls looking out for me?
Anonymous
11th Aug 2017 4:18am
Man this is deeeeep.
I know you know I lived this in my past from our comment interaction.
Sucks bro!
Much respect to you.
Writes always make me think.
I know you know I lived this in my past from our comment interaction.
Sucks bro!
Much respect to you.
Writes always make me think.
11th Aug 2017 12:55pm
Anonymous
- Edited 3rd Jun 2018 9:45pm
14th Aug 2017 10:13pm
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