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silence
silence
he said
was the best poem
never appreciated
problem
he doesn't see
is silence
is mute
and sometimes
denial of existence
is also
non-mentioning
of facts
come on
dear brother
words are tools
they mean business
shouldn't be made
personal
he said
was the best poem
never appreciated
problem
he doesn't see
is silence
is mute
and sometimes
denial of existence
is also
non-mentioning
of facts
come on
dear brother
words are tools
they mean business
shouldn't be made
personal
Published 4th Aug 2017
| Edited 11th Aug 2017
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4th Aug 2017 10:08am
Words, mean nothing if the actions do not correlate.
Silence... has a language all of its own !
Some people are comfortable with pausal silence, whilst others panic from the sound of their own racing thoughts.
I love silence. Its during those moments that I can find clarity, from deep within ~ 👑🎈😎🌷🌞
Silence... has a language all of its own !
Some people are comfortable with pausal silence, whilst others panic from the sound of their own racing thoughts.
I love silence. Its during those moments that I can find clarity, from deep within ~ 👑🎈😎🌷🌞
true
meaning is hollow
when actions don't relate.
that language silence is also isolationist.
poem
is a message
tap on a friend's shoulder
who has dropped his pen
silence, true is medicine
but all medicine
is also poison
if replaces all meals.
meaning is hollow
when actions don't relate.
that language silence is also isolationist.
poem
is a message
tap on a friend's shoulder
who has dropped his pen
silence, true is medicine
but all medicine
is also poison
if replaces all meals.
4th Aug 2017 10:48am
Positively incredible piece of poetry, very provoking. I thank you for this share!
~anonshadow
~anonshadow
4th Aug 2017 11:04am
4th Aug 2017 11:08am
4th Aug 2017 3:27pm
Silence from within can be a reprieve or a retreat.
If the source is known, then the response can be welcomed
As I read here, the source is known, the response appropriate,
and a noise sought.
True friends do not take silence for an answer.
A rightful write.
If the source is known, then the response can be welcomed
As I read here, the source is known, the response appropriate,
and a noise sought.
True friends do not take silence for an answer.
A rightful write.
5th Aug 2017 5:09am
hard
disagreeing
a kindred spirit.
silence
is best consumed
in moderation
never let
the silence consume
you or your dear ones.
welcomed
is the peer
and the views.
disagreeing
a kindred spirit.
silence
is best consumed
in moderation
never let
the silence consume
you or your dear ones.
welcomed
is the peer
and the views.
5th Aug 2017 7:46am
cold one, there is, mayhap,
varied silences ...
... some are necessary
others are cruel.
sometimes, they are louder
then soul shattering screams
this one has left me pondering.
it speaks
true
silences, vary
a peer
her visit
both held dear
and
appreciaited deeply
silences, vary
a peer
her visit
both held dear
and
appreciaited deeply
