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Demoness & Her King
seared in my mind
is your spell
you speak & the screws turn
wicked depths
that I lose myself in
fetid waters I rise from
to grasp your words
spoken from the pit
your ink is spilled
spoken in the demonic
ancient language
it calls on me
brings me back
to where I began
splayed lewdly
on your alter of sin
as you enter me roughly
like the devil you are
with necromancer power
you reanimate the demoness
from deep inside me
she has grown cold
so far from your touch
you speak the secrets
& I dance for you
among the tombs
with lies on my tongue
I kiss your deadly mouth
you spit black venom at me
burn away the false light
i've donned
leave me naked & trembling
in the dark
a punishment for being
an evil disobedient whore
I heed your calling & warning
put on the fierce
I'm your Queen
legion clothes me
let us march my King
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Anonymous
27th Jun 2017 5:22am
Brenda.. absolutely brilliant as always.. love you...
Dave
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Anonymous
27th Jun 2017 4:00pm
I forget now what I said originally but I still love the fierce stomping quality to this one. The Queen is in her element, let all men tremble. So much love, my beautiful Dark Angel
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27th Jun 2017 8:02pm
thank you lovely one for such a beautiful comment bringing me many smiles :) I love you.. xo Crim
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I feel demonically possessed just reading this, lustful thoughts churning in my head.
splayed lewdly
on your alter of sin
as you enter me roughly
like the devil you are
Pazuzu! Inspiring work Lady Crim....
splayed lewdly
on your alter of sin
as you enter me roughly
like the devil you are
Pazuzu! Inspiring work Lady Crim....
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27th Jun 2017 9:15pm
what can I say that others have not? You are one the stars that exist in my perpetual night. Your ink is bad ass and always awe inspiring. I am honored, Lady Crim. Thank you.
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27th Jun 2017 10:15pm
thank you graciously my Darkest Lord what a beautiful thing to say I am moved greatly.. love Crim
Re. Demoness & Her King
28th Jun 2017 1:16am
Kicking ass and taking names is what this creation is all about, Brenda..
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28th Jun 2017 3:28am
thank you dearest Xmar though this is purely a poet who inspires the dark in me :) love Brenda
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28th Jun 2017 5:19pm
thank you graciously David for such a beautiful comment :) love & hugs.. Brenda
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Anonymous
30th Jun 2017 1:37am
My Beautiful Brenda, I don't think you could ever grow cold...you have too warm and inviting of a soul for that...at times I feel that part of your soul needs a rest because of all the battles which you have faced and are confronted with sometimes daily...and that very warmth is was blankets them as they sleep.
I love you passionately
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
I love you passionately
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
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30th Jun 2017 2:30pm
thank you my love yes my dark needs to go to sleep.. I realize now why I let it rest it is too draining to me.. the light gives the dark takes from me.. I love you deeply.. love Brenda