despair is a lady

Shit, Crim!!! What a rocking title that captures the essence of this poem perfectly. 😘
#Penpraise

thank you beautiful Rain I'm beaming here from your comment :) love Brenda

Brenda.. i agree with, Lady Rain.. this is simply brilliant.. i'm spending all my new RL's on you.. but don't worry, you and your art are totally worth it.. i love you my sister..














Dave

thank you Dave for the all the love you are showing me on my writes.. you made my night :) love you my brother.. xo Brenda

I know that motel room and the people who live there. There is not one shred of pride that you can find from any of its inhabitants. This room is the end of the line for most of them, there are few who manage to leave it.

thank you Jerry thankfully this place is in my past now but never far from my memories lest I end up there again.. love you my friend.. xo Brenda

The no tell motel of despair

When you tell this story it's art sister .....

Like

Xo

thank you Poet you gave me the biggest smiles with your comment :)  I lived this life once upon a time & have never forgotten where i've been..  love you my dear friend..  xx Brenda

outrageous, Crim;
endless porn, I was in a motel room like that
in Vegas, with a hooker, she got engrossed in the movie
& didn't want to leave...

thank you John I'm sure it was you who had her enthralled ;) love Crim

My Beautiful Brenda...this write from beginning to the end is gripping and reflective...lessons learned through these harsh experiences and now documented as a reminder to how far you have come...so very proud of you...I'm squeezing you to tiny bits!!!

Kissing you deeply. I love you

With all my love - Taryn xoxo

thank you my love yes I will  never forget my days at the dead end motel painful & good times too.. I love you passionately.. xo Brenda

As stark as this is, the hunger in me wants to be there, for the porn n cum woman, n even to leave a light within her upon departing :)

aw Poe I love the way you see beauty in darkness I think you would do just that leave some light within her before you depart love the way you think you shine  

love you Poe  

Crim

How is it you make something as stark and despairing and create beautiful lines that speak the truth for us to read? There is such pain and introspective thought in this piece. I've always wondered about dead ends...they're not really the end of things. The world goes on beyond them, unexplored and fresh. Something to think on perhaps? So much love, my beautiful Dark Angel

thank you lovely one for such a beautifully insightful comment you're right the motel was not my dead end as it turned out only felt that way at the time love you lady.. xo Crim

Enthralling and evocative lines dear Lady.  

there are no happy endings  
here at the dead end motel  
just cum & sweat  
as tears of regret    
fail to fall    

These must have been among your darkest days but you've survived.  I kind of agree with Ash:  A dead end can be a turning point.  

thank you dearest Sir Crow yes they were some of my darkest days but no not a dead end as it turned out for me at least.. for so many it is but the fates had other plans for me.. love Crim

Party till it's gone and dawn brings back the despair!

thank you dearest Xmar indeed it does.. love Brenda

evocative, reflective: as always, the structure and repeatability of truth

i could liken it to being held down by the neck and these words being whispered in your ear

sometimes quiet speaks loudest

thank you Anna absolutely loved your comment.. love Brenda

The darkness portrayed here is inviting my soul in for a better look, captivated by the loneliness scribed here. Love it

thank you graciously true story gratefully I escaped this place.. love Crim