a lament for Lucifer

Great write but the last line breaks my heart. I hope that is truly not the case.

thank you dearest Ragnar I saw visions of hell that made it a most beautiful place.. I am still unsure where I truly belong.. love Crim

Brenda.. i feel the depth, and questions you pose in this ink.. is their life after? what seemed so natural and comforting.. i don't know the answers, but i know you'll be fine.. whether you believe it or not, you're the strongest woman i've ever met.. because you keep searching, and don't always take things to be absolute.. only a brave soul goes against the grain.. to find beauty, and inner peace.. love you my sister..






















Dave

thank you graciously Dave for feeling me on this write.. yes my demons were a natural part of me & did indeed comfort.. I deeply cherish your thoughts & am honored by your view of me.. love you my brother.. Brenda

touching crim

thank you most kindly Messier.. love Crim

This is a kickass piece of writing, my sweet friend. You have a piece of the "other" side that I used to wallow in. You are on a quest to figure it all out. Luck!

thank you graciously dearest Jerry yes that's perfect a quest :) I love that idea.. I hope I do in time.. love you my friend.. Brenda

Yet another masterfully wrought piece as only a mistress of the night can deliver.

thank you graciously my Dark Lord you honor me greatly :) love Crim

But isn't that the truth? That a fire to keep its flame needs more of the same to keep alive. If things change, it will suffocate and cool down or be snuffed. Relationships need to be cooled, but keeping the embers going. If its too hot it will bring other elements into it to envelope. Too cold it will die.

I enjoyed this ink. It was thought provoking for me. The language of light is distinct from the dark. But are of the same materials.

thank you for such a deeply thought provoking comment.. shedding light to things I had not thought of could be the answer to the question I posed in the poem lies in your comment.. your thoughts are deeply appreciated.. love Crim

Lucifer was a handsome angel with long blonde hair
when he tempted Eloa, the good angel, Crim;
strange how there's always beauty in the darkness...

thank you John I hear tell he's still got his looks ;) I googled Eloa i'd not heard of her love learning new things.. yes there is beauty in the dark it strangely captivates.. love Crim

it's a fascinating write that I find difficult to comprehend - but I guess you had to be there :-)

beautifully written :-)

thank you David the demons entertain & keep a person company so much so it's lonely when they depart.. I deeply cherish you & your thoughts.. love & hugs.. Brenda

Balance in all, my beautiful Dark Angel. You walk in both worlds. I love that about you, my sweet friend. So much love...

thank you lovely one yes balance is the key I love the ability to cross into other worlds.. love you lady.. xo Crim

My Beautiful Brenda, it is in your last stanza where you somewhat answer your initial question...what was their fascination with you? Perhaps it is because you have the ability to carry both so strongly within you...the light as well as the dark...accepting it and never fighting whichever chooses to speak to you, something they were unable to do...that in itself shows but how much strength you have...

I love you deeply, madly

With all my love - Taryn xoxo

thank you my love yes I believe you are right & writing my way through the dark I realize I want heaven to be my destination hell has been my home & it hasn't pleasant stay I wasn't remembering the pain.. I love you passionately.. love Brenda