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River Of Luv
it's your precious luv
that makes me feel so much
deep inside of my soul
when midnight is silent
licking residue off my lips
taste more than passion
of your lingering sweet kiss
tasting pure goodness of us
mind possessed by reminiscing
still feeling your feathered touch
softly gliding across my curves
as we lay inside each other's hug
our hearts beating wildly together
with the rivers swift current
how beautiful are sounds of our luv
harmonizing with natures romance
Copyright © 2017 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
that makes me feel so much
deep inside of my soul
when midnight is silent
licking residue off my lips
taste more than passion
of your lingering sweet kiss
tasting pure goodness of us
mind possessed by reminiscing
still feeling your feathered touch
softly gliding across my curves
as we lay inside each other's hug
our hearts beating wildly together
with the rivers swift current
how beautiful are sounds of our luv
harmonizing with natures romance
Copyright © 2017 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
Published 25th May 2017
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25th May 2017 5:34am
of your lingering sweet kiss
stolen kisses are never forgotten
I have so experienced
as so many of you all too
but u sis
are always best in blue
your special hue
stolen kisses are never forgotten
I have so experienced
as so many of you all too
but u sis
are always best in blue
your special hue
26th May 2017 5:21pm
Hey Bro.....thank you for your words........you always make me smile........purple luv & hugs xo :)
9th Aug 2017 3:23am
25th May 2017 6:46am
I can tell when you have had some special time with your love💜 It fills you up and flows on to the page. It warms my cold veins and makes me love hungry 😋
26th May 2017 5:25pm
Awe Sweet Lily.......you make me blush.......yes I had a great night with my luv.........mmmmmmmmm....he drive me crazy wild......LOL!! Thank you for your gracious words upon my ink.......it's great to see you writing again too.......hope you don't stay hungry long 💜......purple luv & hugs xo :)
8th Aug 2017 5:16am
Hey who the hell is Lily lmao... ummm Tracey the wonderful wrote that lmao..xoxoxoxoxo
8th Aug 2017 2:42pm
Haha!!! You will always be "Lily" to me my precious friend........MAWH!!! Xoxoxoxoxo :)
25th May 2017 12:09pm
That river sounds like a rush...n I'm happy for you my dear...beautiful imagery n words :)
26th May 2017 5:27pm
Hey Poet........thank you for such a happy comment........you made me smile.......a beautiful sound the river makes when in harmony with luv.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
25th May 2017 10:10pm
I luv the river of luv - your romantic poetry lifts my spirits - makes me wish and hope - thank you :-)
26th May 2017 5:31pm
Hey David........I'm so glad this uplifted you........you've brought a big smile upon my face........thank you for uplifting me back........keep believing in wishes and hopes.......they might just come true.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
26th May 2017 6:00pm
26th May 2017 6:09pm
Awe Precious Lena.......always beautiful with your words........thank you for the touch of luv to my heart.......glad you enjoyed this.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
27th May 2017 5:32pm
This is wild, sensuous and tender, and the river flows sweetly. I feel a little calmer after I read you Flower, sometimes even serene. It's always a pleasure.
30th May 2017 00:14am
Hey Crow......the excitement on your words make me smile........I'm so happy you feel calmer.........I always do after I write........thank you for sharing the serenity.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
29th May 2017 9:39pm
I like the way this poem is constructed. I can feel the tenderness is this write. The verses flow well. Purple love. x
30th May 2017 00:38am
Hey Purple........I'm thrilled you liked this piece........always happy to share the tenderness of luv......it's beautiful to the soul.......thank you.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
